Reviews for CotIW: Unfortunate Meetings
Sora with an S chapter 9 . 5/30/2013
The orbital strikes didn't hit the ship? Then where did they go? Into the warp? That wouldn't explain why it looked like they HAD hit it...
Manic Dogma chapter 2 . 12/11/2012
Your portrayal of Hayate here is seriously underpowered. Holding a barrier like that for hours on end should be no trouble for an SS-vaporise-a-small-continent-in-a-few-hours-class mage, though i can understand her reluctance to atomise the lot of them and have done with it.

That said this is an interesting approach to the drama. Neither the imperial forces nor the Orks can possibly emerge victorious from this without some seriously shitty asspulls or gross misinterpretation of relative power levels, but there is nevertheless a serious threat of characters we care about dying before it is drummed into them that neither of the aggressors will ever surrender and the only availiable path is to kill them. Its gonna be a bitch of a pill to swallow for Midchilda Im sure...
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 6 . 12/5/2012
Speaking of the ship, whatever happened to the Navy crew? they are completely outside of IG's chain of command (pretty much like Commissars who are outside and above of both's chain of command). And even in the Imperium very few share the bleak and cold views of Death Korps.
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 2 . 12/5/2012
The Imperial tactics looks like a purge, though lack of flamers was surprising. It is an accepted tactic to conquer as much of the enemy territory intact and keep as many people as possible alive (for the rebuilding efforts if nothing else), but the way the Imperials are cutting them down... It's a purge.

93 galaxies... If I was not familiar with how anime works, I would have called bullshit, but then technically in MEverse council controls a galaxy by having domination over less than 1% of it. 93 galaxies... the Eldar could reshape solar systems on their whims and even THEY could not rule one galaxy. Orks are an unstoppable tide and even they were not enough. Only Tyranids might have a larger head count.

"Try not to hurt them too badly" is not something you consider when fighting orks. Hope they survive this mistake without much loss.
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
Ah, the delights of Imperial negotiation and piece-making... But if they can afford it the Imperium usually works with soft conquest (sending traders and slowly taking control of every aspect of discovered planet until it is theirs) rather than hard.

Though if it is a Crusade they would send a heads up and if answer is not pleasing send in the men.,
Catz1112 chapter 9 . 11/23/2012
More! Oh good heavens yes, I love this story! Looking forward to more from you, both in this story and any others that you may end up writing.

DarkJackel chapter 9 . 11/20/2012
Yes Subaru but, hopefully, this nightmare is only just begining.

Liked that the orbital bombardment had no effect. While that may be explained by them running into the first layer of void shields it is more comforting to think that the overloading warp engines let the Ruinous Powers. Failing that it is nice to think that the Krieg still have some part to play in Tzneetch's plans.

Alternatively the fleet's computers could have been hacked and they are just too arrogante to consider the possibility. If so then hopefully the Krieg can put that to devestating effect.

The fight with Nanoha's group was good and her reaction was realistic. Also it was pleasant to see that most groups suffered massive casualties. As a fan of both Nanoha and Warhammer 40K it makes sense that the Ace of Aces would survive but the 40K doesn't play around like Nanoha does so the outcome should be brutal.
Wetoos chapter 9 . 11/1/2012
Thought this story was dead until I found this massive update! Great story, but i kinda feel like the krieg are getting their asses kicked, still a great story though!
Full Circle Of Trust chapter 9 . 10/28/2012
Lame. I'm pissed off this cuntbag actually downgraded the lasgun, that motherfucker's beast It splits your chest apart not give a peper cut, and Vox networks are very advanced, those Techseers made sure it was. Stupid anime cocksucking whore
Sdarian chapter 9 . 10/27/2012
Nice to see this updated. There are a few problems with the editing, but it wasn't too annoying (missing spaces, new lines in the middle of a sentence, left over editing info).

Looking forward to more!
TenguTie chapter 9 . 10/26/2012
If i were to place a bet it would be that the TSAB will not engage in the unrestricted warfare that is necessary till it is to late for a victory and such methods becomes more of a delaying action.

Most impotently though is that the previously unbeatable main characters will find themselves in increasingly bad situations till whatever twist you have planed shows itself then the entire dynamic of the conflict will change.

That is what i would bet if I were a beten man.
MatchingTies chapter 9 . 10/25/2012
Glad you're back. This was an awesome chapter, maybe next time the death Korps will show the heretics the emperors fury.
Keep up the awesome writing
Obssesed Nuker chapter 9 . 10/25/2012
An update? BDZ is still alive? Holy crap!
S058 chapter 9 . 10/25/2012
For anyone who's wondering why the orbital fire seemed to have utterly missed, Imperial Void shields have this tendency to send shots fired into them into the Warp, AKA another dimension.

Anyway, nice seeing the Death Korps get a genuine VICTORY, for once. So far it's been draws at best, at worse, they don't even get to inflict meaningful casualties. Damn Barrier jackets...
Ferdiad chapter 9 . 10/25/2012
It's ratlings not ratings. There's stil way too many ellipses. It makes reading this so awkward, dialogue needs to be smoother with less pauses, cut out 9/10 of the ahs and umms.
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