Reviews for Variations of Hope
comte chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
It was a very beautiful take on that strand. Well done!
AwesomeAuror chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
You really have a knack for writing these depressing tales. Good job, I loved it.

One quick point; it is not Charlies, it is Charlie's. Charlie is possessing Desmond in the idea that Desmond is Charlie's personal angel of death. You used this twice in the story.
PandaFire McMango chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
Oh man...I got a little misty there, man. Very nice. Charlie, WHY?
Wickedgal08 chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
wow! that was just incredibly...moving! It was realistic, beautifully written and I loved it!

A little grammar point to note is that when you're saying something belongs to someone you include an apostrophe so "Charlies life" becomes "Charlie's life"

other than that it was amazingly written!