Reviews for Albus Potter and the Mirror of Erised
dominatorsvector chapter 19 . 11/5/2013
I have got you!
You are JKR in Disguise :)
One of the best writes I've ever read
Cheers,
Mehul
Elizabeth Magenta chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
hey lorna, it's phoebe!

I love it, so excited to keep reading :)

ly xxxxxxxxx
Tyverius chapter 19 . 8/3/2010
Hmm...

Well, you write very well, you've got a lot of talent in this field and that puts you way ahead of a lot of writers on . The story isn't the most original I've seen, but it's still fun.

The one thing I do have to say though...is that there really isn't a climax here. There's no point where the action rises a great deal so that it's noticeable. Also, the story ends kind of abruptly in the middle of first year instead of continuing through. It feels like a lot of the story is missing here.

I guess the ending disappointed me a bit, but I do want to read more about your setting, so I'll definitely keep going.
56th Reg. Sergeant Epps Hande chapter 20 . 8/2/2010
Wow! I'm going for the next one!
Adventure-Seeking-Juliet chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
Good first chapter! :)
AliS256 chapter 5 . 6/24/2010
This is really good so far. I can't wait to see how it goes on.
Martionmanswife chapter 20 . 1/3/2010
great story. I am thrilled with this series. great job.
Skippy Agogo chapter 19 . 12/7/2009
An interesting story, one thing I have to mention is that you described Harry as an 'infamous' wizard. 'Infamous' is a word used to describe bad people, e.g. g w bush is an infamous president or Lord Voldemort was an infamous wizard. Harry would be a famous wizard, much as he might not like it.

I do like how you've written the quest to find out what the parent's did during the war. But, for the most part, kids don't care all that much for what their parents did. Although I would have to say that Scorpius probably wouldn't know - or want to know - what his father did during the Voldemort war...
AcerGirl chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
your story is wonderful! did you know that i was going to write a story entitled 'Albus Potter and the Mirror of Erised', too? *grins* i guess we had the same idea! ) yours turned to be better than mine, though.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! )
hpismylife chapter 19 . 10/27/2009
...so why was it called the mirror of erised?
Blosiom chapter 20 . 10/8/2009
please update soon
Tina95 chapter 20 . 10/7/2009
Wow. You won't believe how excited this author's note got me. There are so many clues hidden in the note that I can't wait for the next installment. I actually think that the last chapter is a great ending, even though I would love a couple more. Oh well!

I can't wait for the next installment. Is it up yet? Wait, I can just go check. *Leaves for checking*
dahilsaiyo chapter 20 . 10/7/2009
Congratulations on completing this fic...I look forward to the next installment. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading the story. I do love Al and I hope that you will involve Teddy at some point. The interaction between the entire Weasley/Potter clan would be much appreciated in your future installments.
sjrodgers23 chapter 20 . 10/7/2009
thanks for the story please keep writing
ndubbs chapter 19 . 9/22/2009
I hope this isn't the end of the story...I really like it, but I also hope that Albus and Scorpius can have some adventures of their own instead of just finding out about their parents...though that seems like it will be a good sub-plot. I also hope that the mirror of erised will have more of a central role to the story being that it is in the title. I am really curious for what happens next, but I am concerned that I will be disappointed.
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