Reviews for Evans the Mudblood
catarina chapter 7 . 7/11/2012
greatttt job! i was astounded at the detail! my faves were narcissa! and all the slytherins!
meridian-rose chapter 4 . 8/17/2011
Lots of character development in this chapter, as Lily finds her allegiances tested and shifting.
meridian-rose chapter 3 . 8/17/2011
But, you tell yourself, you're a witch: you'll figure something out.

I love the repetition, the way each chapter starts and ends, reinforcing the overall theme.
meridian-rose chapter 2 . 8/17/2011
Is that Luna's mother with the wonderful necklace of dandelions, I wonder.

Nice work with the expletives.
meridian-rose chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
'Transfiguration for Beginners (even the names of the books are fascinating)' so much this :D

And the end of this chapter 'some of the magic has gone'; heartbreaking.
Hawk and Handsaw chapter 7 . 9/25/2009
this was a beautiful series of chapters.
Squid7000 chapter 7 . 7/21/2009
Ah-mazing! It made ame cry! Oh my gosh, that was incredible!
Danwea chapter 7 . 7/21/2009
This was beautiful. Truly.

This is so very Lily, well done :]
Window Girl chapter 6 . 7/17/2009
A very good story. I like how you ended each chapter with "You're a witch, but. . ." Are you planning to write more?
Window Girl chapter 3 . 7/17/2009
I can just picture James putting beetles in Lilly's hair.
Window Girl chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Excellent chapter! You captured perfectly just how Lilly would feel upon entering the wizarding world and how tramatic being called a "mudblood" could be.