Reviews for Eternal
Impaladreams chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
That was so very sad.

Lovely drabble though

Jane
sweetysmart0505 chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
Poor, poor John, having to lose Mary in that way. But it happens so fast, people regret many things. Nice story.
1983Sarah chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
So sad, and that thought process had to be going on, the idea that Sam might never remember, which of course, he was too young, and Dean being so little too.
Anjelicious chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
waww musica! you made me cry with that one...it was really awesome !
CatBeist chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
A very good one... I am glad Sam did get to meet Mary once in his life though... that he remembers :)

As said, a good little story, thanks for sharing
Port-of-Seas chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
*sniff* If only we'd gotten to know Mary a little better...
bhoney chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
Aw...this was beautifully written. Very poetic. I loved this: "He wishes he had captured every one of her smiles in the palm of his hand and saved them..." Beautifully said. So poignant.

This was just heartbreaking: "And time is cruel, he knows…he can only hope that Dean will remember, but Sammy may never know her face. Her smile." *sniffle*

Wonderful job! I'm favoriting this, for sheer writing brilliance.
CiZiwejes chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
Oh dear! This is so heart wrenching. I mean it's a sad sad fact that little Sammy didn't even remember his mother until he saw her as a ghost. You did great picturing John's feeling here, it made me sad. Love you for it! Great job!
IheartSam7 chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
*sniff sniff* so good.
PlatinumRoseLady chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
*Sniffles*

So very sad.
JenF chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
Very sad and very poignant. Beautifully written.