Reviews for I Won't Fade
Guest chapter 9 . 7/26/2013
Ahhhh, I was really upset over the ending. It was good until the last chapter :/ you should change the characters to Naruto and Neji rather than Gaara and warn everyone about the OC's. It ended so abruptly, too. Could have had a much better ending. :/
Guest chapter 5 . 7/25/2013
Sorry but this story really pissed me off. I mean it was great at first but then it went down hill from there. I mean I really think you should at least put warnings in the summary about side pairings and OCs. And I was pissed the most about the NejiNaru thing if this was gonna turn out to be that dont put it as Neji and Gaara. So frustrating I really feel like you could've done better and I also feel like I've wasted my time. You've also made me hate the characters Neji and Naruto.
Guest chapter 9 . 2/6/2013
That stroy could be soooooooooooo much better
cyhap chapter 9 . 1/28/2013
it was a good story but i can honestly say i really hate neji and naruto in this story! couldn't stand neji's betrayal even if him and gaara weren't officially together still hate him for playing with gaara's feelings and leading him on like that and not even realizing how much he hurt gaara nor did he apologize. though i'm glad gaara had elliot
xxXJoyous EmoXxx chapter 9 . 10/17/2012
V for Vendetta! That last little paragraph, quote, thing was from V for Vendetta right? I love that movie :) I loved you're story too. I spent most of my day at school reading it. Made my day so much more entertaining (I actually had to get up and running around a few time while reading your story because it was just SO good!) Anyways...you're just awesome.
Cy.ra.no.Lee chapter 2 . 8/9/2012
I love you for two things.

1: Nickelodeon alram clock.

2: Jan Lee (HAIL Dead or Alive!)

I just noticed: Breathe no More?
Guest chapter 9 . 8/6/2012
So fucking disspointing i waisted 5 hours on my life. For this shit, and they didn't even end up together? Burn in hell bitch. Uh you piss me off. THIS WAS SHIT. OMFG I hope Jashin will pay this bitch a visit. Ha i'm just fucking kidding. :) Nice storie. It was actually a really great story. Not the serious type. Ya now? I hate that shit. This is just free minded and so fucking awesome. Ha, have a great fucking day. Oh, and i hope this shit made you laugh Most people only read the first sentence then start cusing my out. Lol, I'm just fucking with you though. Your a alright righter. No spelling none of that shit. A fucking Plus.
Shania chapter 5 . 8/6/2012
I just want to make my irration know. Because i bet i'm not the only one who is irrated with this. You have a problem with writing stories about other people when it's met to be about someone else. It is so god damn annoying i'm quiting reading all of your god damn stories. It makes no since to write about someone else. Even Ino had a part in this story. FYI Ino is a bitch. That is why i read yaoi to avoid all girl's. Your not a real writer. Your just filler.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
hey not saying that this story sucked or anything, because really it didn't. the writing was great and it was creative and all in all good. but come on dude! give a little warning bout your pairings! like if its gonna be nejiXgaara, then its that , because that's what i came to read! at least give a heads up bout u later changing the pairings at the end or something. because honestly i feel like i just wasted so much of my time on this story to end up reading nejiXnaruto (out of all couples) and then for gaara to end up wit some random OC? i don't know, i'm just saying i'm extremely disappointed. like i even continued reading during the chapter where naruto started making-out with neji JUST waiting for neji to reject him and realize his feelings for gaara. it was clear at the end of that chapter, and comments that i later viewed, that this story was going in a totally opposite nd "out of nowhere" direction. i mean, you even set up the whole naruxsasu ( my FOREVER favorite OTP) at the beginning wit them rooming together and "hating each other" like they usually do at the beginning. in the end, i'm a bit peeved at this story and i'm gonna state, if it wasn't already obvious, i didn't even bother finishing it as i completely lost all interest at that point.
aliendroid chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
Interesting intro, can't wait to read the rest...moving on to the rest.
HimekoUchia chapter 9 . 7/6/2011
This was such a great story! I'm disappointed that Neji didn't fall in love with Gaara but I'm happy that they all found their special someone. Ive got to admit, the ending made me want to bawl my eyes out. Im sad but glad. This proves that you are a great writer, to make me feel this way. Urg I want to punch Neji but I knew Elliot was coming back sooner or later. Yay for DOA characters, it used to be my favorite video game!

HimekoUchia
The Akuma's Sakura Violin chapter 9 . 4/19/2011
I just... ugh.

Don't you hate it when your favorite pairing breaks up?

And I know it's just a fic, but I was so mad at Neji and Naruto... ntm Sasuke was left alone with the fangirls!

Great story, but I personally dislike the end result *shrugs* No offense.
The Akuma's Sakura Violin chapter 3 . 4/19/2011
*chuckles*

Why do I get the feeling you're from Australia?

Moving Forward, ne?

xP
Gynma chapter 9 . 4/8/2011
In a way I hate Naruto and Neji cos I don't like the betrayal thing even if its a fic it gets to me, not that its happened (thankyougod) but at the same time I understood so much when the whole Naruto and Neji thing came to light. I was like "WOAH". At least it worked out for them cos they're still together at the end not like some fics I've read that people go back because they love each other still but end up separated and its like all for nothing. :S

It's and interesting fic because you read the characters and you usually think those are the "main pairings" and this one turned out differently. I'm a sucker for the "main pairings returning no matter what yet at the same time the side who was most hurt making it harder for the other to get them back(though I wish I'd see more of that cos its usually something easy or letting the "wrong head" take over) but I did like the ending. I was left content. :)
Gynma chapter 5 . 4/8/2011
ROLFMAO with Jiraiya's "geico" comment.

Genius your after story postings.
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