Reviews for Vows II: Duty
Boggart chapter 19 . 6/18
As usual, you did not fail to amaze me :)
Alie-yaoi chapter 19 . 6/23/2014
i like
Damesdale Gratia chapter 18 . 5/13/2014
What i really loved from the Vows II was the friendship between Paddy and Crooks! They were just soooo adorable together! Another great improvisation on the story as well. Even though i was a bit frowny at Narcissa since i think that her reason for neglecting Draco was a bit unreasonable. Any i loved to see that the bond between Severus and Harry was getting stronger.

PS: cute banner! lol
Doublesims chapter 13 . 4/24/2014
Triskaidekaphobia:
extreme superstition regarding the number thirteen.
Ironic that you left that seen out.
Guest chapter 18 . 9/18/2013
loved it !
TheOnlyTrueMagic chapter 17 . 7/7/2013
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rocketmom chapter 4 . 12/7/2012
I enjoy your writing style and the fact that you let us into the heads of the familiars. Nice touch with crookshanks formerly being the potter cat.
Katalara chapter 18 . 10/27/2012
Loved the story!

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Erisa Daelyn chapter 19 . 8/27/2012
Another good one :)
Griffin Raven chapter 11 . 7/16/2012
I can't help wondering if any of the other "adults" knew of Lily's kneazle cat Pye...but also just where did she get the kneazle...or who gave her the kneazle, just out of curiosity? Also ss animagus such as Pettigrew/Scabbers shows up on the marauders map but what about other familiars such as the great Crookshanks/Pye...I mean if Mrs Norris shows
on the map with Argus Filch when he's patrolling the school or was that only because she
was with Argus?

Absolutely wicked story! Utterely brilliant sequel to the first story "Vows" and I can hardly wait to see just what that twit Lucius Malfoy might do next, because I know that
I've read this story before but as I have read so many since...I'm on tender hooks to
find out! I really, really wish (sigh!)...that Severus (or someone else) could actually
bring Lucius down a peg-or-two or even just a little, hmm! Its a right shame that the
twit just doesn't seem to realie (or care) just what he's potentially thrown away (in
Draco's care) and in the process of throwing away his wife Cissy & his daughter. Wonder
if he's even thought about just how he'd explain that if/and when MoldyShorts rears his
snubby head, hmm?
Chase'sGirl19 chapter 18 . 7/1/2012
Cute ending :3
Edwina B. Karch chapter 18 . 6/14/2012
I am so enjoying the series. Great work.
Edwina B. Karch chapter 10 . 6/13/2012
Well that was interesting. It is good that Narcissa has a friend in Severus I would never thought to write it that way.
Grammar Nazi chapter 2 . 3/21/2012
Just wanted to let you know about a prolific misuse of a word. In all of your first story Vows and in at least the first two chapters of Duty you have been spelling the word Whine, and its conjugates, wrong. They are spelled like this: Whine, Whined, and Whining. Great story though
lyieu chapter 18 . 3/14/2012
Nice sequel! I liked the dialogue between Lupin and Snape, but I wish that Harry was given the map. And I kind of wanted to see Snape being insulted by the map right in front of Lupin... that would have been funny!

It was nice to see Luna being brought into the story too!
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