Reviews for Vows II: Duty
Yvonne Park chapter 18 . 1/19
Great story, once again! I really enjoyed reading it. I love Harry and Draco as siblings. They are great together! Great job! :)

-Yvonne
Fenris Jin chapter 18 . 10/2/2015
Earrings! Emerald earrings to boot! That was brilliant. I think it's only fair that it's not in ruby or sapphire for their house colors for the brothers, but emerald for their father's.. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 17 . 10/2/2015
Hmm.. Not sure why Harry had to beg Sirius to accept Severus.. In a story where Harry Potter really is James Potter's son, sure.. But in this story where he just got reacquainted with Sirius? Where Sev is his real father? Not really.

Harry doesn't remember Sirius. Sure, he's the best mate of a man who tried to save his life as a baby, he's his godfather.. yeah.. But really, there isn't anything substantial enough between the two of them for Harry to seek the man's approval. It's alright to be considerate, but basing on the conversation that followed, there was a great deal of disrespect that should not have been easily tolerated. Yet, there was even begging. Why must he beg Sirius for his understanding? He ended up resorting to beg Black. If Sirius was my godfather I just met and he started insulting my father who's the world to me.. Well (insert rude remark here) him! No one sullies my parent's name. I actually expected Harry to blow up on Black for the insult. Righteously and even irrationally defending his father's name like a true Gryffindor.

All of a sudden HP and SB are all chummy.. and Harry's gotten attached to Sirius in a blink of an eye. It's as if Harry's suddenly starved for affection and he's seeking it from his godfather who he only just met. A man who tormented his beloved father as a child. Canon!Harry, I'd understand, but again, not this one. XD

The family fluff at the end appeased me though. Happy Snapes! :D
Fenris Jin chapter 13 . 10/2/2015
Lily on James' lap while they're still in Gryffindor? I find myself confused seeing as Severus and Lily married first..which was after Hogwarts. xD

Panther eh? Too bad all patronus are silvery. It would have fitted Severus if it was a Black Panthera, the dark tones and the intimidating stalking grace would be all him. xD
Fenris Jin chapter 12 . 10/2/2015
Patronuses! So Moony's patronus is Padfoot? I wonder why it didn't change after the supposed 'betrayal'.

Hmm.. Will Prongs make an appearance?

Will Severus' doe make an appearance?

I'm absolutely curious! XD
Fenris Jin chapter 9 . 10/2/2015
Aww.. Cissy.

Severus really loves having kids out of wedlock. And yet no affair to speak of. xD

Hm.. New player in the game now that Draco has a little sister. I won't feel too bad if any future pairings are made. If there won't be a future Huna and Dramione. Still though, I think the Snape brothers will spoil the baby girl rotten. xD
Fenris Jin chapter 4 . 10/2/2015
Luna's here! XD

I was hoping for a Dramione along with a Huna.. But with Draco in Ravenclaw, I wouldn't mind two blondes together.. I won't have anyone shipped with Harry though if it happened... I'm crossing my fingers against a Harry/Ginny. Maybe Draco befriending Luna will lead up to getting her together with his brother? :D
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 10/2/2015
I'm looking forward for this new adventure. :)
Boggart chapter 19 . 6/18/2015
As usual, you did not fail to amaze me :)
Alie-yaoi chapter 19 . 6/23/2014
i like
Damesdale Gratia chapter 18 . 5/13/2014
What i really loved from the Vows II was the friendship between Paddy and Crooks! They were just soooo adorable together! Another great improvisation on the story as well. Even though i was a bit frowny at Narcissa since i think that her reason for neglecting Draco was a bit unreasonable. Any i loved to see that the bond between Severus and Harry was getting stronger.

PS: cute banner! lol
Doublesims chapter 13 . 4/24/2014
Triskaidekaphobia:
extreme superstition regarding the number thirteen.
Ironic that you left that seen out.
Guest chapter 18 . 9/18/2013
loved it !
TheOnlyTrueMagic chapter 17 . 7/7/2013
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rocketmom chapter 4 . 12/7/2012
I enjoy your writing style and the fact that you let us into the heads of the familiars. Nice touch with crookshanks formerly being the potter cat.
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