|Reviews for Inside Eden's Mind|
| CrazyStephanie chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
The first chapter intrigued my interest 100% Im looking forward to reading the next chapters Good work
| Shinkicker chapter 43 . 8/13/2013
This was quite a cool story. I'm surprised it doesn't have more reviews. It was a good little psychological mystery story. Honestly for a while there I was expecting her to turn the doctor into something the same as herself. The father angle was interesting though, but I guess I'd have liked a bit more to it. Nonetheless cool story!
Thanks for posting.
| falalalaa chapter 43 . 8/8/2013
you made me love ivy even more, amazing, i'm pretty sure this is the best fanfic i've read. thanks.
| ScOut4It chapter 36 . 7/11/2013
I like how they tricked Ivy's father into coming.
And how they knew Batman would look there so caused a delay.
| ScOut4It chapter 35 . 7/11/2013
/"Now, now, Harl, don't be crass." Ivy chided, though the smirk on her rose red lips betrayed her amusement. "We'll have plenty of time to muse upon Selina's questionable liaisons and true allegiances later, for now we need to decide what to do with her."/
I can think of a thing or two. . .
| ScOut4It chapter 34 . 7/11/2013
I am excited about what your chapter warning promises :)
/"I'm curious Hazel... Who is it your more concerned for the welfare of, me, or Eric?"/
Yes, reading more now.
/"Your opinion is all that matters, Pamela..." Hazel replied, still staring up at the other woman in adoration.
"Mmmh, please, doctor... Call me Ivy."/
That was nice, not super graphic, but nice.
And the seeds have been sown: Ivy's murdered again.
| ScOut4It chapter 33 . 7/11/2013
If they are wrong and Ivy doesn't lose her cool... Then Selina had better stay out of sight and get back to the penthouse in time to untie the snoozing blond.
| ScOut4It chapter 32 . 7/11/2013
Lol! This makes sense if you are from Texas:
/As she entered she was surprised to find how cold she had left her apartment, she didn't remember putting the thermostat to 70./
But almost anywhere else on earth and 70 is considered anywhere from warm to hot.
Hazel, Hazel, Hazel *head-shake*
She should just give in and serve her master, she's practically a pet as is.
| ScOut4It chapter 30 . 7/11/2013
Score for Arkham:
"Yes, yes, I thought so. It must be hard, seeing Ms. Quinzel reform herself and run off with Ms. Isley, leaving you here... with no one to laugh at your pathetic attempts at humor. Well, fear not, Joker. I'll laugh... but it will most likely be at you, rather than with you."
| ScOut4It chapter 29 . 7/11/2013
Now that she's free(ish), I hope we get to see more of the behind the scenes with her.
I wonder how Selina and them are conversing.
I'd like to see Ivy make Harley's pig-tails spin (not sure if you get that graphic though), and wouldn't mind seeing how far Ivy plays with Birch and if she plays with her with Harley too...
| ScOut4It chapter 27 . 7/11/2013
Hazel is so smitten:
/Hazel came to sit next to her, pen at the ready. Pamela glanced at her and laughed again. "...like a student in her favorite class."
"Nothing, you're sweet when I'm talking about something you're fascinated by."/
Mmmm, I like it when Ivy tends to her new pet. Moves are being made.
| ScOut4It chapter 28 . 7/11/2013
I like Ivy hot and bothered and then bothering Harley to get her in the same predicament.
I think Ivy is very pleased with herself :) As she should be.
| ScOut4It chapter 26 . 7/11/2013
Love Catwoman! Too bad she's straight...
| ScOut4It chapter 25 . 7/11/2013
I do hope that Harley stays away from Mista J... Not her M.0., but still.
I like how Harley was eying Ivy's breasts and imagine that Ivy planned it out like that.
I wonder how far you are going to have Ivy take the interesting seduction of Hazel and also if Ivy feels anything for her other than that of how she feels for a garden spade/tool?
| ScOut4It chapter 24 . 7/11/2013
And then it's playtime!
/You bring them to us, and we treat them until they escape again, then we wait for you to bring them back. Every time, more people die, and yet we still continued the charade. I couldn't bring myself to do it anymore, and one day Batman, you won't be able to either..."/