|Reviews for Yomi's Morbid Hunger|
| A Gentleman Of Leisure chapter 5 . 7/15/2009
I enjoyed this. It's funny; the only other Azu-Vampire story I've come across also featured Yomi being 'turned'. That one however was never finished.
I particularly liked your ending, with Tomo saying they'll always be buddies in 'unlife', and Yomi having sudden second thoughts, and thinking she'll go and check out Kagura instead.
There's definite scope here for quite a sizeable saga of Yomi's adventures as a vampire ('Kyuuketsuki' in Japanese) with the other girls either trying to fight her off, or trying to save her somehow. I can just see Sakaki fending her off from drinking Chiyo's blood!
| andyjay18 chapter 5 . 7/5/2009
Hmm, interesting. But is that it? I would've liked to see the whole gang's reactions to their friends as vampires.
All in all, I like your writing style. It's very crisp and easygoing, despite the morbid circumstances. But perhaps I would've titled it just "Morbid Hunger" rather than "Yomi's Morbid Hunger".