Reviews for Little Bella
khris91 chapter 8 . 5/26/2014
cant wait for and i enjoy the story
NickChick22 chapter 8 . 3/30/2014
Pretty good! Will await the epilogue!
Guest chapter 8 . 3/20/2014
i would just like to point out that they have just kissed for the first time and admitted there feelings to one another and now he is asking her to marry him-sorry to unrealistic
thekatiemadeline chapter 8 . 6/25/2011
wow this is really good! plese carry on writing! i love the plot of teh stroy and u have writen it rlly well!
twilight-jemmett chapter 8 . 6/18/2011
more plz
Jenny chapter 6 . 4/12/2011
Come on this is a great story!
AlleyjandroJacobie chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
Love it!
KMS1226 chapter 6 . 4/3/2011
Jenny chapter 6 . 3/30/2011
Jenny chapter 6 . 3/29/2011
Love the story
emmagraceling chapter 5 . 3/26/2011
um... the f***ing in the first sentence really doesn't make sense. I mean, that word is very diverse but it is usually not a good thing...

loved this chapter!
emmagraceling chapter 4 . 3/26/2011
I'll be in class with Edward and Alice, what was a good thing.

Edward and Alice were my best friends.

also it says a few times: he hasn't a girlfriend.

we generally say he doesn't have a girlfriend

lastly, by highschool, we generally call them guys and not boys.

I really love this story! its awesome and I love this plot in general, so its even better with edward and bella
emmagraceling chapter 3 . 3/26/2011
one mistake- aren't that bloodsucking creatures

should be aren't they bloodsucking creatures
twilight-jemmett chapter 6 . 3/26/2011
gemma loves edward chapter 6 . 3/26/2011
:) good story so far
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