|Reviews for Little Bella|
| khris91 chapter 8 . 5/26/2014
cant wait for and i enjoy the story
| NickChick22 chapter 8 . 3/30/2014
Pretty good! Will await the epilogue!
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/20/2014
i would just like to point out that they have just kissed for the first time and admitted there feelings to one another and now he is asking her to marry him-sorry to unrealistic
| thekatiemadeline chapter 8 . 6/25/2011
wow this is really good! plese carry on writing! i love the plot of teh stroy and u have writen it rlly well!
| twilight-jemmett chapter 8 . 6/18/2011
| Jenny chapter 6 . 4/12/2011
Come on this is a great story!
| AlleyjandroJacobie chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
| KMS1226 chapter 6 . 4/3/2011
CAN'T WAIT 4 THE NEXT CHAPTER!
| Jenny chapter 6 . 3/30/2011
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! LOVE THE STORY! " LOVE STORY"
| Jenny chapter 6 . 3/29/2011
Love the story
| emmagraceling chapter 5 . 3/26/2011
um... the f***ing in the first sentence really doesn't make sense. I mean, that word is very diverse but it is usually not a good thing...
loved this chapter!
| emmagraceling chapter 4 . 3/26/2011
I'll be in class with Edward and Alice, what was a good thing.
Edward and Alice were my best friends.
also it says a few times: he hasn't a girlfriend.
we generally say he doesn't have a girlfriend
lastly, by highschool, we generally call them guys and not boys.
I really love this story! its awesome and I love this plot in general, so its even better with edward and bella
| emmagraceling chapter 3 . 3/26/2011
one mistake- aren't that bloodsucking creatures
should be aren't they bloodsucking creatures
| twilight-jemmett chapter 6 . 3/26/2011
| gemma loves edward chapter 6 . 3/26/2011
:) good story so far