Reviews for Thoughts
thisisforyou chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
This was good, an interesting way of expressing Posner's thoughts.

I know it's terribly hypocritical, but your sentence structure is not very good; try using colons, semicolons and full stops to break up your sentences instead of commas because it doesn't read very well.

Other than that, good job.

-for you!
Secretsofthedarkness chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
ONE SIDED DAKIN/POSNER! xD finally, just the fic I was looking for :D good job!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Yay thank you my dear friend of mine n.n

Stories make my day, especially when it makes sense and is in character.

It's undeniably Posner-ish. So hesitant and simply him all over it.

I love how Posner's still ever so innocent.

*applauds*

Should it be any longer, it might have been silly and ranting; shorter it wouldn't have conveyed Posner. xD If you get mymeaning。

(Pardon the font。)

Lovely and Posner。

Heck, if he got his wish, the fics might make less interesting reading。

Well done me buddy-bud-bud。