Reviews for Begin Forever
sandy.morganlopez chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
I liked this pairing and the way you wrote it. I also thought you did great with the lemon. Good balance of affection, passion and fantasy.
PrincessLiya chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
this should be a full story and not a one shot!
Babysis64 chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
this was also a good short story thank you for sharing it with us. The way Bella had to be patient with Jasper and to keep telling him that he won't hurt her I thought that was very sweet of Bella to encourage him. Thank you for sharing this short story with us.
AnuluvesTwilightSeries chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Wowwww the lemons was so hot and I loved how Bella was so dominating and resuring jasper and I loved the dirty talking and how jasper could feel all the pleasure he was giving Bella that was totally hot. Loved der love making. Good job writing it
FaithfulJourney chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
This was amazing! I love the dirty talk, Making love and fucking either way, and possessive/jealously, and the saying that your only mine.
XxSideswipe'sGirlxX chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Omygosh! I loved it! You should make another chapter with Bella being a vampire.
HisSecretLover18 chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
LOVE IT!
wendy1969 chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
great one shot

I like how you made it so emotional and understanding from both of them.

I love the loving scene as well, it wasnt just a quickie.

I loved the one shot full stop.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
Awesome :)
TwistedNeiviv chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
Rawr.

That is all. Just. Rawr.

*puts on a pout face and begs* Please keep writing A Second Chance?
Marco Consani of Glasgow chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
Wow, this story got me so hot and hard, I came like 6 times. Keep it up! (I know I did!)
Cassiakohn chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
that was pretty damn hot. nice work
starnosy chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
woah! just amazing...love this one-shoot...its just perfect!

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SummerChix chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
This is officially my favourite lemon! I love the chemistry and the resistance in Jasper!
chavamirjam chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
I loved this oneshot very much, you depicted Jasper's struggles very well, plus it was very hot!

Merry Christmas!
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