Reviews for Begin Forever
sandy.morganlopez chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
I liked this pairing and the way you wrote it. I also thought you did great with the lemon. Good balance of affection, passion and fantasy.
PrincessLiya chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
this should be a full story and not a one shot!
Babysis64 chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
this was also a good short story thank you for sharing it with us. The way Bella had to be patient with Jasper and to keep telling him that he won't hurt her I thought that was very sweet of Bella to encourage him. Thank you for sharing this short story with us.
AnuluvesTwilightSeries chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Wowwww the lemons was so hot and I loved how Bella was so dominating and resuring jasper and I loved the dirty talking and how jasper could feel all the pleasure he was giving Bella that was totally hot. Loved der love making. Good job writing it
Lt. Cmdr. Kono McGarrett chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
This was amazing! I love the dirty talk, Making love and fucking either way, and possessive/jealously, and the saying that your only mine.
XxSideswipe'sGirlxX chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Omygosh! I loved it! You should make another chapter with Bella being a vampire.
HisSecretLover18 chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
LOVE IT!
wendy1969 chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
great one shot

I like how you made it so emotional and understanding from both of them.

I love the loving scene as well, it wasnt just a quickie.

I loved the one shot full stop.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
Awesome :)
TwistedNeiviv chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
Rawr.

That is all. Just. Rawr.

*puts on a pout face and begs* Please keep writing A Second Chance?
Marco Consani of Glasgow chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
Wow, this story got me so hot and hard, I came like 6 times. Keep it up! (I know I did!)
Cassiakohn chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
that was pretty damn hot. nice work
starnosy chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
woah! just amazing...love this one-shoot...its just perfect!

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SummerChix chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
This is officially my favourite lemon! I love the chemistry and the resistance in Jasper!
chavamirjam chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
I loved this oneshot very much, you depicted Jasper's struggles very well, plus it was very hot!

Merry Christmas!
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