Reviews for One Down
ComicalEpiphanies chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Great emotional effect. I was really impressed just how ashamed I felt for him.
Motherofthehorde chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Thanks for writing. I'm impressed with the short. Hope you write some more.


jquist chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Pretty good thought piece. I enjoyed how you had Jake flashback to what the brother had said about his sister being captured and having a chance at a different path.

I think you have promise!