Reviews for State of Shock
Arw165 chapter 17 . 4/12/2017
The feeling of morbid curiosity kept me glued to every next chapter. That's one disfunctional, maybe even toxic relationship those two have. I wish we had more flashbacks to what the situation was before boys got together and right after it happened. Plus some more of Naruto's POV. The whole fic is very sex-centered, although it have its (few) sweet moments. Anyway, Sasuke tried to be forceful with Naruto and crushed he's vocal cords, right? Was Naruto okey with not trying to alert someone and heal it? I have this bad feelings, especially after the parts with Naruto starving himself to shoe his love to Sasuke (?) or tightening the leash on him. Maybe just like with the eating disorder, Naruto decided not to heal his vocal cords to keep Sasuke closer, make him protective and maybe guilt him into staying with him? Some twisted emotional manipulative blackmail or something? Naruto likes Sasuke's protective strike, like the way Uchiha takes care of him, so... and Sasuke likes the way Naruto is dependant on him. That's not healthy at all.

I feel sorry for little Itachi though. Nobody seems to love the kid, not enough to shower him with affection anyway. It's sad when you think he might never hear someone say his name in the loving way? Either because they don't love the kid or they hate the 'traitor Itachi'.
Hinatauchiha1 chapter 17 . 10/21/2015
I hope that with this naruto can talk again and their relationship gets even better they do love each other and hopefully naruto stop being stubborn and tell everyone about them so they can date properly and perhaps even marry maybe even get sasukes baby because like assurance said she hates him so I guess he would be better with them at least naruto would be a better mom please update soon
Hinatauchiha1 chapter 11 . 10/21/2015
Why the hell does naruto wants to keep it as a secret if mostly everyone if not the whole village already knows about them why keep quite
Akayuki chapter 17 . 9/23/2015
Please you must finish it... Prety please with cheery on top
Tiny Sky chapter 6 . 9/10/2015
lol, someone in the reviews asked for NaruSasu, but ew #SasuNaru4lyf :p jk, but seriously no NaruSasu for me
Lou chapter 17 . 8/25/2015
I love this story. And it s very well written. I NEED to know what will happen . Will you continue it?
akanichi chapter 16 . 5/22/2015
I love this story. And dying to know what will happen next. So I wonder why do you abandon this... Please write more
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2015
can you write narusasu rather than sasunaru? it makes more sense since sn always make sasuke a pervert when narutos the perverted one. and they always make naruto innocent when sasuke is actually the pure one
Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
This story is absolutely amazing. I am constantly re-reading it, and I can't thank you enough for creating such a brilliant story. I hate to pester you about updating but please...please update!
Daphmir57 chapter 2 . 8/5/2014
And no one has too.
Mess With Me I Mess With You chapter 4 . 7/25/2014
Whose POV is this? o_O?
natsuhibushi chapter 17 . 5/10/2014
Please continue the story, it's so good and exciting _
Daphmir57 chapter 9 . 4/9/2014
O. M. G. *Awed voice* (Whisper) That's hows it happened. Ands remember, don'ts apologize for somethings you enjoyed!
cary99 chapter 17 . 3/15/2014
Love it please update soon
xXIara-chanXx chapter 17 . 3/3/2014
Oh my lord! You have two more chapters ready of this fanfiction? Please update then, I wonder what will happen next! Your fanfiction is very interesting! So, please, do not be discouraged! :)
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