|Reviews for Such A Simple Thing Contest Example|
| acirelemagne chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
so good. simple, eloquent. it says so much with so few words. and i love his reaction, almost involuntary to the situation. can't wait to see what great one shots come of this contest!
| Britt01 chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Oh, SNAP! Nice twist! Abso perfect. The last line - heartfail. Yeah, I'll go fangirl over this. ;) Great example for your contest.
| altdolf85 chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
That was so sad! I feel so bad for Edward, he's all pining for her but she's got Jasper. I love jasper, but where's Alice when you need her?