|Reviews for Origin of the Demons|
| AspergianStoryteller chapter 2 . 1/22/2010
Your story would be easier to read if it was more spread out into paragraphs.
| Serena6686 chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
| zeth chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
your writing needs editing but you got the point across.
| Pay-Pay-Anime chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
I love it! Can't wait for chapter 2!
| buzzbumble chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Reasonable chapter first up... Will there be benefits for both partys since the seal is gone?
| Litewarior chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
So, what does releasinng the seal do? Does Kyuubi have his own body now, or is still in Naruto?