Reviews for Sibling Rivalry
Vadercat60 chapter 13 . 9/5/2021
Great story, loved the comrarderie between them.
Vadercat60 chapter 11 . 9/5/2021
Error if Tony was critical for being shot in the back, there is no way he would be up and about after surgery. They might move his bed to Mc. Gee but he would be maybe down graded to serious after a day or two. They would also still have Catherine as it helps them measure his condition and fluid out put.
Penelope the Perky Penguin chapter 13 . 6/20/2019
I read this story years ago and loved it, and I have spent so long trying to find it again.

AWESOME JOB! I love a good Tim/Tony whump/friendship story.
Vadercat chapter 11 . 3/18/2019
I believe you made an error on this chapter. Tony would not be in a wheelchair, he would be the one in ICU not Tim. Tim would be wheeled to Tony as Tony is the one more seriously injured of the two.
missblueeyes63 chapter 13 . 6/10/2016
Enjoyed reading this story. Well done.
Chantilly's Mom chapter 1 . 5/23/2016
bjq chapter 13 . 1/12/2016
love it
Guest chapter 8 . 8/30/2015
Wow! I absolutely loved the way they resolved their issues in this chapter. And a worried papa bear Gibbs is my favorite kind of Gibbs!
Guest chapter 6 . 8/30/2015
On the one hand I'm loving the brotherly bickering, but on the other I'm sensing a tad of McGee distaste. I don't think he's the kind of person to insult someone for growing up richer than others, since he went to MIT and all. Plus, Christmas at the McGee household couldn't have been all that great, either, with an Admiral as a father. Also, it's been stated several times on NCIS that Tim doesn't get along with his father, so I feel like that could have been a good way to get them to understand a little about one-another.

I think you have a great talent for writing, so please don't take my displeasure at your depiction of Tim the wrong way.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/12/2015
danita3 chapter 3 . 2/20/2015
I just wanna say that this is absaloutely ridiculous and made me angry up to no end. Its not just in this story, but its in every damn story in NCIS category where everybody's covering up for Tony's bullying saying that his heart is in the right place and he's just joking around and we can't blame him cuz he had a difficult childhood when in fact everyone's covering up for just because he's good looking and funny. And then, when Tim stands up to himself he's the venomous one filled with hate and bitterness and a black heart.

I wanna ask you something: have you ever been bullied? I sure hope you weren't! Its an awful feeling that makes doubt yourself, hate yourself, and feel lonely when you have thousands of people around you. And if you were bullied and still approve of this circus, i think you should revisit that horrible time in your life and remember what it was like. So yeah a character like Tim is my hero, not the latter.

And i wish Tony fans would stay out of Tim centric stories where they continue defending Tony, you have thousands of other stories that glorify your beloved bully. I realize these are just fictional characters, but I find ugnoring bullying and passing it as good humor very appalling :).
M. Louise E chapter 13 . 10/29/2014
I loved this one. Nicely done. I enjoyed reading this. :D
Me chapter 2 . 6/1/2013
I re-read this Story, because I love it so much:) . But I think I need to say something about the teasing:
McGee were bullied in the highschool. For him, it's really hard to believe that Tony is teasing him because he cares. He only knows the teasing from the bullies. The bullies who wanted him down. I think, that's the reason why he can't see it. He only knows the "bad teasing". He don't know the "good teasing".
noukinav018 chapter 13 . 5/26/2013
Aw that was great. Seems like Tim and Tony will be working nicely together. I missed Ziva though...
noukinav018 chapter 12 . 5/26/2013
I shed a couple of tears again in here :)
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