Reviews for Of Chaos and Power
TatlTails chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
For your first poem, that's really good. Really, for ANY poem, it was really good. It flowed quite nicely, was clever, and you even captured the characters' personalities well. Also liked the Cosmo reference.
NoName chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
Nice little piece, much better than I could do for the fourth line seems a bit awkward, not quite meshing with the third. maybe you could try something like :The things they have done and aim to achieve"? just a suggestion.
PhiloWorm chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
Better than anything I could ever dredge out of my demented psyche that's for sure.