|Reviews for Original Sin|
| Spellweaver10 chapter 31 . 4/26
Very good fanfiction. I really liked it. The writing was good and you did a good job with the plot twists. I also like the OC you added and her backstory.
I believe that it would have been suitable to have one more chapter with Bulma explaining what happened to Vegeta but all in all I liked it and it goes in favorites. Sorry for not writing more reviews after reading the chapters but it was because I was finding all the chapters exciting thus I was in hurry to read more.
| Spellweaver10 chapter 25 . 4/26
I didn't like this chapter. Bulma can't add two and two and Oika had to pay when she had done nothing wrong.
Other than this this ff is just great.
| Miss Artistista chapter 31 . 12/4/2013
Very good story! Really absorbed me! You should make another one
| rennysusanto chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
| Lady Eruanna of Mirkwood chapter 31 . 8/7/2013
Aww! So kawaii! Baby Trunks... :3 great fic loved it!
| Morisako83 chapter 4 . 5/19/2013
Go vegeta :-)
| Morisako83 chapter 3 . 5/17/2013
I like how you put vegeta pov
| Morisako83 chapter 2 . 5/17/2013
Who know that yamcha had it in an ass
| Morisako83 chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
The way this ch start :-) me like a lot
| rychefan chapter 31 . 3/21/2013
| beautiful-note2895 chapter 31 . 2/20/2013
Just wonderful in my top three fav stories so far!
| NEsan chapter 8 . 12/26/2012
| angel chapter 7 . 12/26/2012
i love this story
| smalsa chapter 22 . 11/1/2012
I was wondering when he would find out about the truth, but this was brutal!
| smalsa chapter 11 . 10/31/2012
hahahahha that was so great! Super genius, I loved the twist, I do hope the alien is a total air head though!