Reviews for Original Sin
Spellweaver10 chapter 31 . 4/26
Very good fanfiction. I really liked it. The writing was good and you did a good job with the plot twists. I also like the OC you added and her backstory.
I believe that it would have been suitable to have one more chapter with Bulma explaining what happened to Vegeta but all in all I liked it and it goes in favorites. Sorry for not writing more reviews after reading the chapters but it was because I was finding all the chapters exciting thus I was in hurry to read more.
Spellweaver10 chapter 25 . 4/26
I didn't like this chapter. Bulma can't add two and two and Oika had to pay when she had done nothing wrong.
Other than this this ff is just great.
Miss Artistista chapter 31 . 12/4/2013
Very good story! Really absorbed me! You should make another one
rennysusanto chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
Love it!
Lady Eruanna of Mirkwood chapter 31 . 8/7/2013
Aww! So kawaii! Baby Trunks... :3 great fic loved it!
Morisako83 chapter 4 . 5/19/2013
Go vegeta :-)
Morisako83 chapter 3 . 5/17/2013
I like how you put vegeta pov
Morisako83 chapter 2 . 5/17/2013
Who know that yamcha had it in an ass
Morisako83 chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
The way this ch start :-) me like a lot
rychefan chapter 31 . 3/21/2013
awesome story
beautiful-note2895 chapter 31 . 2/20/2013
Just wonderful in my top three fav stories so far!
NEsan chapter 8 . 12/26/2012
wondedrful
angel chapter 7 . 12/26/2012
i love this story
smalsa chapter 22 . 11/1/2012
I was wondering when he would find out about the truth, but this was brutal!
smalsa chapter 11 . 10/31/2012
hahahahha that was so great! Super genius, I loved the twist, I do hope the alien is a total air head though!
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