Reviews for 30 Minutes That Changed Everything
scyfly chapter 11 . 8/29/2019
harry crying for ppl who tortured him?
scyfly chapter 10 . 8/29/2019
they nearly killed harry and get off with signing away their rights of him? you dont honestly believe that do you?
scyfly chapter 9 . 8/29/2019
you've just learnt that faith in god was one of the big reasons the magical world is in the state it is yet you happily go to church?
scyfly chapter 9 . 8/29/2019
robert is not bob but rob
scyfly chapter 8 . 8/29/2019
what is a wand? i really dont know i mean sure gandalf used a staff but thats a staff not a wand and there are no muggle myths about wands only staffs
scyfly chapter 7 . 8/29/2019
no magic has ever been created to stop a bullet, that is such bullshit. arresto momentum litraly means stop movement, impedimenta also cause objects to freeze. i have no doubt that with a bit of tinkering you can create an amulet that stops objects with high enough vellocity.
the real awnser is ofc that that much kinetic energy prob takes a lot to stop as such unless you can feed the enchantment new magic it will prob drop fast. and without it manually casting a spell will never stop a bullet unless you have ample warning
scyfly chapter 7 . 8/29/2019
ofc wizards studied were magic comes from but they didnt study the rest of the world, how can you fit magic in laws of nature when those laws are unknown.
scyfly chapter 6 . 8/29/2019
you're gonna time travel to preven the nucliar hollocast but you hsve to make a choise, the right time or the right place. any sane person would choose the time ofc travelling around the world aint that much of a hardship. so ofc you being you chooses the place, ahh thats to bad seems the boms have already dropped welp at least i am in the right place
scyfly chapter 6 . 8/29/2019
what you say about puzzles and riddles is exacly opposite. a riddle often misses much info and can even have many awnsers, a puzzle is where you have all the pieces and have to find where they fit.

you're not to bright are you?
scyfly chapter 5 . 8/29/2019
7 years old dont observe things as beautiful or fetching. they think they look nice or pretty
scyfly chapter 4 . 8/29/2019
everyone had birthdays wheter they are celebrated or not is another thing.
a warrent for the dog to be detainrd and destroyed. will he be interogated after being detained? or will it be recycled after being destroyed...
scyfly chapter 3 . 8/29/2019
so you're saying in the original time line he survived from a punctured lung and that many broken bones, he did this while passed out with no food and severe fever.
you want me to believe magic fixed this? yeah i find that hard to believe.
honestly you try so hard to put as many words as possible on paper yet at the core the plot is just flawed. not even to mention that your plot is supposed to be saving the world from a nucliar war so i really dont see why you put so much time in detailing his abuse. a detailing that is clearly exagerated bs.
if you like abuse so much go to a bar and pick a fight im sure they'll be happy to oblige
scyfly chapter 3 . 8/29/2019
right the grangers find harry aint that just convenient
scyfly chapter 2 . 8/29/2019
your proclivity to name ppl by anything but their names is truly strange
Noy chapter 1 . 8/13/2019
Why would he loved her if she cheats on him time and time again ? Especially if "his" children aren't even his. Shouldn't he hates her ? Because the only thing I could think of when you write that he loved her was : Man, he is kinda pathetic isn't he ?
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