Reviews for 30 Minutes That Changed Everything
Resurrection99 chapter 14 . 1/30/2021
Son of a bitch...
Guest chapter 53 . 1/14/2021
Rose and Alice ask the dumbest questions.
Guest chapter 52 . 1/14/2021
Fantastic story - too bad the sequel was never completed.
love4HP chapter 55 . 1/5/2021
Finished this first part and really loved this story.
love4HP chapter 21 . 1/3/2021
I don't know what all the fuss was about hiding Harry from magicals if you had to out him the first instance he went to magical world. With the stupidity of not hiding scar, with added stupidity of not coaching them what to say if someone asks or what lie to tell about their life and identity in order to hide them. So much fuss and emphasis on hiding him and not a Knut of effort to disguise his looks by McGonagall and so called new adoptive parents. And no effort to coach them what to and not to say. Highly stupid for a probable good logical story till Chapter 20!
love4HP chapter 19 . 1/3/2021
I don't know what's the protests about younger girl being noble at least. I agree girls should inherit equally. But there was a reason to pass on titles and real properties to only males, to keep those within family line. Because girls after marriage go on to another family.
That1person chapter 12 . 12/27/2020
Too much repeated information, example the hermonie and harry marriage thing. Most of the repeated info was rephrased or just added an other small detail that bogged the pace of the story. In all this felt like reading a Secound draft not the final print. Only read to chapter 12 so can't speak for the rest of the story, couldn't keep interest because of the retelling of stuff over and over again. Advice if new charters have to be giving the run down on what the reader already knows don't just dump it all back at the reader you'll loose their interest. I am no writer so good luck. The premise was intresting enough for me to read up to chapter 12.
Guest chapter 42 . 12/23/2020
Wow you have made hermione fucking retarded. Must mean the writer is brainless.
Guest chapter 31 . 12/22/2020
More stupid ass dumb questions from supposedly smart people.
Guest chapter 19 . 12/22/2020
Wow Harry is really stupid for a supposed intelligent person. Some of these “concepts” he’s so clueless about I understood in first and second grade. Harry is supposed to be extremely intelligent and about to skip to fourth grade. He sure as hell doesn’t act like it. He’s a fucking moron. And the sensei is not Harry Potter. One of the things Harry hated more than anything was being kept in the dark and given no or vague information. And yet sensei is doing exactly that. Waiting a fucking week before even coming back? Not realistic at all. His refusing to answer questions? Something Harry would never ever do to his younger self. So this sensei is just another manipulative asshole controlling Harry by only dribbling critical information. And the longer he waits the more useless his info is since the timeline is changing. Another person who has decided he is the only one who knows best. Looks like you tried to mirror future Harry after dark lord dumbledork.
Guest chapter 16 . 12/22/2020
Retarded parents.
IronHair chapter 55 . 12/3/2020
Finished reading another time
IronHair chapter 1 . 11/29/2020
rereading
the-cari-moose chapter 54 . 11/26/2020
God the amount of time THE EXACT SAME PEOPLE have had THE EXACT SAME DISCUSSION about why they need to go to Hogwarts when they've already completed their masteries is INFURIATING.
the-cari-moose chapter 36 . 11/25/2020
dude you literally already had them learning and ACHIEVING a fully corporeal patronus at school in their third year... you also had them learning to send messages with them in charms class NOT as "Potter Family Magic"

The adults also all knew they were learning to be animagi AND THAT SIRIUS WAS ONE.

I love your story dearly but gosh it can be frustrating to read.
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