Reviews for The Beast and Pariah
FollieOfMadness chapter 7 . 1/12/2013
Funniez:
Even Alex Mercer had to shit.
FollieOfMadness chapter 6 . 1/12/2013
Fairly interesting chapter. Again.
Funniez:
Instead of bending it like Beckham they're whipping it like Mercer, eh?
FollieOfMadness chapter 5 . 1/12/2013
I'm intrigued to see you explain how this all works and whatnot.
Funniez:
"Damnit, that Wade is a spy!"
FollieOfMadness chapter 4 . 1/12/2013
Again, what I've stated previously could be said here.
Although, I'll admit this is gradually getting better and better as time goes on. The story in the making effect, in which a fanfic will undoubtably get better over time, at its best.
Funniez:
"YO MOMMA is so fat, even Alex Mercer couldn't consume her ass!"
FollieOfMadness chapter 3 . 1/12/2013
The plot is somewhat hard to follow. But that's probably because I have the InFamous storyline ingrained into my mind, and having a change in it equates to 'does no compute' for me. :P
As for funniez:
"The Super Soldiers, A.K.A, the Power Ranger rejects."
FollieOfMadness chapter 2 . 1/12/2013
You can re-read my last review for my thorough opinion on this story.
Funniez:
"Very well, I'll bring him back. Alive. FOREVER."
FollieOfMadness chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
I find it interesting how you don't use quotation marks to indicate speech; not bad, but interesting. Different stories have different voices, so to speak, therefore a story like this sing a very odd melody. On one tone, you find spirit from the Author. On another, you notice the increase in creativity and or, originality. The third and final note, of any importance that is, is that of a mixed feeling. The first half dictates that this is a bad, bad story; the opposite, the opposite.
Rule of thumb for this? Its nice. Not overly great, but just above it.
Ciruno chapter 2 . 8/25/2012
Oh my, its getting more tense as each chapter gets by.
Can't wait for Cole to battle Mercer! And hopefully not get consumed
Ciruno chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
You sir got my interest! Its rare to see great looking crossovers! My only recommendation, would be to make it longer.
LadyMardore chapter 7 . 6/17/2012
NUUUU! YOU CAN'T LET THEM JUST LEAVE EACHOTHER! THEY ARE BROS! KEEP THEM TOGETHER I SAY!

AND MAKE A SEQUEL!1111
LadyMardore chapter 6 . 6/17/2012
SEQUEL!
LadyMardore chapter 5 . 6/17/2012
IAHBBEHAFKIJEGHA FANGIRL SENSES TINGLED AT ALEX/ZEUS'S PROTECTIVE SIDE!
LadyMardore chapter 4 . 6/17/2012
Your doing perfect with this! Please do continue!
LadyMardore chapter 3 . 6/17/2012
This is good! I'm telling my friends about this!
Minimoose117 chapter 7 . 5/3/2012
I'm really enjoying this kinda sad there isn't a sequel or new chapters :(
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