Reviews for Knowing the Horizon
noodleloverxDDD chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
i don't get this story AT ALL
AwkwardIdeasLeadToThis chapter 2 . 10/22/2010
what the h was up with that chstory?
AthenaPersephone14 chapter 2 . 2/4/2010
Wow, this was really good. You should use original characters, expand it, and post it on Fiction Press. If you do, PM me. I would totally read it; you write really well. ;-D
pendragon96 chapter 2 . 11/24/2009
please continue it! it's so good
Midge 1012 chapter 2 . 8/10/2009
i think this was a gr8 2 shot!

i luv it

i also luv the endin

plz dont add more

x
DeathlyRomance chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
Wow, it's really sad. Guess I have a knack for picking out sad stories. But it really good, all the same. I hope you do write the epilogue paragraph. I'd enjoy it very much. Thanks.
Rainie16 chapter 2 . 7/1/2009
Awll...It's so sad...and sweet...at the same time...LOL...
5253Racer chapter 2 . 6/30/2009
i'll definitly cjeck out ur other stories.

thanks for the last bit of this one. i really hope u contiune it. if u need ideas try going into what caused the whole scene on the pyramid. idk. its ur story and i love it! just suggestions, lol. hope u write more with it.

D
Um. just me chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
That was really well written. I'd like to read the spilogue paragraph.
hawk without wings chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
please add the extra chappy.
5253Racer chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
WOW! i so want more! please write more!
NamesCat chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
This was amazing, but, I'm a bit lost. Are you saying their wings never existed? Otherwise, I vote YES to the epilogue!
Me14 chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
Could you post that "epilogue?"
nathan-p chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
I thought it was pretty good, although it fits better for original characters than for Max and Fang.

Two bits of criticism, though.

"Once, she would have thought he sounded said." Shouldn't that be "sad"?

“I know.” She sighed.

I noticed this persistently throughout the fic - it would be more correct to write:

"I know," she sighed.

This would also help the flow from dialogue to narrative work better.

:) Anyway. That's just me.
Randomitis Sufferer chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
thats it? no story? i bet it would be heaps good if you made more of this :(

i'll be waiting for if you do