Reviews for Harry Potter and the Muggle Mess
Guest chapter 1 . 6/5
"the squib sister of Lily Potter"

How the hell did you come up with that? Lily's parents were muggles (that's what made Lily a muggleborn, remember?). Therefore her non-magical sister was nothing else than a muggle as well.
grimmich chapter 1 . 3/28
At least one good thing came from your Orwell remodel; the completely banned magic being moved to controlled is a much better solution. That way it can still be studied and used under certain circumstances instead of being lost entirely. While I am sure the intention of banning it in the first place was good... well lets just leave it at 'the road to hell is paved with good intentions' (which is 'good' Dumbldore's main avenue of operation to be honest).
BMS chapter 1 . 3/24
Very Good.
Like how you had Narcissa still plotting.
KoldT chapter 1 . 1/31
Very much enjoyed this.
geenakmom chapter 1 . 1/31
Really enjoyed reading this.
Darknessdawns chapter 1 . 1/25
This was a rather interesting piece that really gave a good look at what could have happened. Without Dumbledore messing about with things Magical Britain did become vastly different and Harry had a much happier childhood. I'm honestly a bit sad the story ended here. I would have enjoyed seeing how things could further change, especially with the prophecy still in play and at least one known horcrux. Of course there's also the Malfoys who look to be preparing to stir up trouble. I can definitely see Draco trying to become a Dark Lord with his mother's urging or at least setting things up for Voldemort.
Sleepyhawk502 chapter 1 . 12/29/2022
Great story. Thanks for sharing!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2022
I love coming back to read this hehe. Like good on you for dying fumbles! Seriously if you weren't such a f up things could have been resolved much earlier. This isn't a case where normal ppl are going up against a terrorist organization - it's a situation where both sides have magic and means and yet somehow one side is not banding together and working in the right way
Quaziemoto chapter 1 . 10/26/2022
Cool adaptation of Harry Potter, really enjoyed another perspective.
That's saying something coming from a 76 year old male!
Tetradical chapter 1 . 9/30/2022
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 1 . 6/30/2022
Well. This was certainly interesting. How was Snape not answering more questions, taken as evidence that he was lying about being a spy? He can’t lie.
LadyPhoenix68 chapter 1 . 5/18/2022
Oath of all School children seems extreme, oath or oblivate/magic binding for someone expelled from hogwarts makes sense. Oath of office bound by magic for people working in government makes sense.

The lack of insuring that there were no more horcrux though was their criminal carelessness. Especially if Sirius took control of Bellatrix's vaults after war as head of black family.
yochan123 chapter 1 . 4/23/2022
it's annoying that draco is being groomed as a new dark lord - and once again proving that if you need to end the bad guys, MAKE SURE TO END ALL THE ROOTS.

hahahaha dumblebitch shot dead by vernon. honestly yeah wizards have spells but caught unawares it's impossible to beat modern technology and weapons. can you imagine lucius malfoy overcoming dudes with machine guns? yeah, no.

finally with dumblebitch not able to fuck up education for everyone continuously things can actually improve. i'd almost give vernon an order of merlin for offing dumblebitch

and ofc the blood wards are involutary since nobody apparently questioned that LILY DIED IN GODRIC'S HOLLOW AND APPARENTLY THERE ARE BLOOD WARDS AROUND PRIVET DRIVE? LIKE DOES THAT MAKE SENSE TO ANYONE?

It means there are no more Unforgivables. We opened the door for the Aurors to use them, now we have to make sure they are used the right way. All of them are now Ministry Regulated spells and can be taught and used by licensed persons…who must report when they use them under pain of losing their magic. The Obliviation spell and manufacture of veritaserum falls under this new law, too.

fucking lucius

hahahahaha snape you will never get out of azkaban. die like the bitch you are

"We stunned them, adjudicated them, and put them into a prison. They raped, robbed, exploded, and murdered anyone who stood in their way or anyone who caught their fancy. We had twenty thousand innocents, some of them well trained in combat; at their peak, they had one hundred fifty seven, all of whom drilled in combat curses and tactics. We operated within laws of combat; they took every law we had and did the exact opposite. We deliberated our actions and policies amongst a large group with a number of known traitors, at least a quarter of the Wizengamot, taking part in the discussion; the would-be Dark Lord kept his discussions among a narrow, trusted group of advisors. We responded to their terrorist attacks; they picked and chose the venues of this war. We never acted on the intelligence we gathered, never preempted a single attack, never arrested a single witch or wizard unless we stunned them in battle;

The Ministry of Magic must develop magic and procedures to rapidly respond to magical attacks committed on our witches and wizards. Notification and response times in the past wars have been abysmal, so new types of magic must be created for the future."
the decrees are so good.
FriendlyFire59 chapter 1 . 3/28/2022
That was a very interesting take on an early change cascade.

Thanks for posting.
Dayside chapter 1 . 1/21/2022
I would move far far away if some schmuck dared to try and force me to limit my magic, my very soul.
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