|Reviews for Siblings|
| pugfaced chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
This was amazing ;D
| Julia Claire chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
A bit too short, but sweet anyway.
| Eden C chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Aw, very sweet...
And it's good that it's short, because it's never good to drag out these moments too long!
I loved it!
| ej8012 chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
Yes, it is short. But then again, it works nicely with the two's relationship, although they do try to ignore th fatc that they are related it reminds them every time they see each other. I like it, try to add more and make it longre. Also, when someone speaks you make a new paragraph: “You did wonderful, brother. The Kadeshi peasants must be happy.” Wuold be:
“You did wonderful, brother. The Kadeshi peasants must be happy.”