|Reviews for Reborn Again|
| I'llbeme813 chapter 19 . 2/14
I liked it but I would have liked it more if Edward stayed human and the baby was a human. Also, if the baby had a different name. It just didn't fit this story.
| Me chapter 12 . 2/21/2013
Good story but the outfits you have described i the story sound so ugly. Lol I mean skull pockets come on that's not hot.
| Reviewer chapter 19 . 12/6/2012
Hi. I'm not normally one to leave a bad review and I fully enjoyed the first 16 chapters of your story. After that though, not so much I'm sad to say. This chapter is extremely inconsistent. In an earlier chapter you have Bella say that her and Edward had sex a lot when he was human. Therefore the only logical conclusion is that he got her pregnant when he was human. I was looking forward to reading how you dealt with a human baby and the vampires, but suddenly in this chapter Bella's giving birth at 7 months to a half vampire baby. If Edward got her pregnant when he was human, how is the baby part vampire? This chapter does not make sense at all and it completely brings down your story. It doesn't really fit well with the rest of the story. It feels like you just threw it in there. When you write anything, you should always make sure to keep it consistent. I'm an editor and my biggest peeve is when someone says something in one chapter then contradicts themselves in another. Please make sure you watch out for that in the future because I really enjoyed the first 16 chapters of this story. It was an interesting idea I haven't come across before and it was really great. Chapter 16 would have been the perfect way to end it, I think.
| Tsuruga-Ryuuki chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
AWESOME! i think I'm in love!
| Edward-Jacob4ever01 chapter 19 . 12/9/2011
NICE! I LIKE THAT ALOT! IT WAS A GOOD STORY!
YOUR BIGGEST FAN EVER!
| ladeerelli chapter 19 . 10/23/2011
I liked your story.
| kayla chapter 19 . 7/13/2011
it doesnt make sense they baby should be full human since edward was human when he made her. and the ending is too fast
| Leibeezer chapter 19 . 7/3/2011
I loved this story!
| twilightlvr4vr chapter 12 . 4/24/2011
DAY-UMMMM :P lol that was SOO HOTT I LOVED IT
| twilightlvr4vr chapter 11 . 4/24/2011
Haha that was FUNNY :P
| twilightlvr4vr chapter 7 . 4/24/2011
Awww that was sooo cute:) I loved it
| AbsoFuckingLutely4everTwilight chapter 19 . 4/9/2011
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww! Lovely story! And dammit it was hot! Ome I love humanward! So cute and sexy and idk adorable!
Idk what to say but I've been looking for a story like this fir ages! It was awesome! CONGRATULATIONS! maybe the last two chapters were a bit too rushed! I mean u could've put a marriage proposal idk! Hehe but it was awesome!
The club thingy was way too OOC but hot as hell!
I'm going to recommend this story via twitter! You're awesome! Can't believe it! Ive always wanted a human Edward exactly the same as vamp but human! THANK YOU!
ok you're great! Loved it! It was funny sexy sweet cute idk ! AND it had barbie Bella!
ABSOFREAKINGLUTELY LOVED IT!
Greetings from Argentina!
| addicted-to-romione-bedward chapter 19 . 10/11/2010
It was a great story, although I don't know how she could make a hybrid since Edward was human when they had been together, but anyway... your story, your ideas. Amazing.
| addicted-to-romione-bedward chapter 13 . 10/11/2010
This was short and hot. Emmett will be Emmett.
| addicted-to-romione-bedward chapter 9 . 10/5/2010
This should be fun