Reviews for Kidnapped by Alice
Guest chapter 4 . 6/6/2015
Please update
XhopeluverX chapter 4 . 4/2/2012
Damn! Why do I always fall in love with the stories that are abandoned halfway through? Come on , I know its been three years, but update!
Shsway chapter 4 . 8/7/2011
What I find so amazingly readable about this story is just how much of it is dialog. Dialog that doesn't suck, or tries to be overly hip/tragic, or goes on, and on, forever. You've struck the right balance here between romantic fluff (adorable and sweet), and the expected narrative.

You even managed to elegantly side-step much written-about drama relating to character pasts and love triangles. Something that usually makes a story and that I expect to be reasonably covered in any good Twilight fic. Still, I'm pretty satisfied with the light and airy feel of things here.

I do hope that you decide to write more someday.
bitten2 chapter 4 . 5/29/2010
awesome start! please update soon!
Claire the Doctor's Assistant chapter 4 . 1/28/2010
this is great! keep it up.. dont forget authors notes
AJLYAMBER96 chapter 4 . 1/1/2010
okay. my mother is lesbian. and i dont get this. my mother was with my father while with women. well woman. but now they r divorced. lol. but i honestly think bella should stay with edward. and alice should be with jasper. it fits better. no offense. i know wlaice and bella loves eachother. but i cant see them loving eachother like that. like i said no offense. i just cant!
AJLYAMBER96 chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
is alice bi? is bella bi? cuz i know that is not a certain sign of friendship...
The Lady of the Land chapter 4 . 12/19/2009
so jake's ok with it?
The Lady of the Land chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
i think this will be interesting, i actually think b/a would make a good couple. but i have to ask, what about jasper and edward?
MadDelight chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
l like it lots.
AlwaysandForeverHers chapter 4 . 10/23/2009
Faved it, this story is awesome.
1711AdvenaAvis chapter 4 . 9/30/2009
Good job !

Please hurry up with next chapter.
AppealingToHeaven chapter 4 . 9/3/2009
I really enjoyed what you have written so far.

Please update soon!

-Falcon
mumu15 chapter 4 . 8/28/2009
awesome story, hope you write more soon. D
xXxZellyxXx chapter 4 . 8/16/2009
interesting, can't wait for more,

bella so sneaky, lol

ciao
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