Reviews for Phantom XMen |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please start writing the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHEN YA UPDATING? |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont know how im supposed to go about this... but i wanna adopt your story. i like this idea so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You sure know how to build suspense, don't you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a paragraph. Not a chapter. If you post another "chapter" I hope it's longer then this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you going to write another chapter? Please do! It sounds like I'll be an awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() are you going to write longer chapters in the future? because the one paragraph was a bit disappointing. other than that i'll be waiting for the next part to see how this goes. i liked your summary. |
![]() ![]() ![]() not bad for a newby but you need to make them longer good luck with your storys hun |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sounds intresting. but PEASE!UP-DATE!REAL!SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() your story has promise but you need to add detail, a lot of it. take your idea and blow it out of proportion, think about what you want to wright and add every measly detail you can think of. |