|Reviews for Perfect Forever|
| zelda potter chapter 24 . 8/16/2012
I'm so happy! Keep writing!
| zelda potter chapter 22 . 8/16/2012
It was so sad. I cried a lot. So did my boyfriend. You really are as good as Stephanie Meyer. So many emotions put into your writing. I love it.
| Zelda Potter chapter 12 . 8/15/2012
You are an awesome writer! Almost as good as Stephanie Meyer!
| Guest chapter 24 . 7/29/2012
| Guest chapter 24 . 6/6/2012
I loved everything that you wrote. It was beautifully written, I loved the end. I loved especially how Leah's life came full circle. You did a fantastic job!
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 24 . 2/16/2012
I really love your story. I like how some people die, even though that sounds wierd. In most stories there's battles like that but nobody dies and it just doesn't make sense.
| Kim chapter 17 . 12/29/2011
In the letter from the Volturi, it says Carlise is the matriarch of the Cullens but seeing as that's the female head of a family I believe you mean patriarch.
| Linguist chapter 24 . 1/29/2011
Lovely ending! Funny bit about Edward's mindreading "vision" of Charlie and Sue's honeymoon night! I'm looking forward to your sequel!
| Linguist chapter 23 . 1/29/2011
I absolutely love the blended family! I love the graduation gifts! Happy Ending! Of course you're leaving things open for your sequel...
| Linguist chapter 22 . 1/29/2011
Susie here -
Wow. I'm so glad it wasn't Ethan who killed Garrett. Interesting development with Allie - I wasn't expecting that! Very nice touch having Bella and Edward go back to her "childhood" room for a little lovemaking! Awww!
| Linguist chapter 21 . 1/29/2011
Grisly image at the end. I'm so sad that Paul died, but happy that all the Cullens survived. I'm really wondering now if Ethan killed Garrett and put his head on the stake. If so, then there will be some infighting next. I'm also wondering if Leah will make it. The last two chapters were intense. I could never write anything like that. Kudos to you!
| Linguist chapter 20 . 1/28/2011
WOW! It was great to having the tender moments at the beginning - really lovely. I'm so upset about the deaths. I guess that is realistic, though. Maybe Rosalie isn't really dead?
| Linguist chapter 19 . 1/28/2011
I loved how you portrayed Edward after learning the sad news about Cantwell. It was so sad! The relay race and the football game (why should I have been surprised that you would put that in!) were welcome tension breakers. The football game - of course I don't get all the football stuff, but I loved how you made Bella good at it! Football with mind reading Edward was very amusing.
| Linguist chapter 18 . 1/21/2011
That was really scary! Suspenseful and shocking. Very unexpected that Dallas did so much damage. Poor Garrett having to kill that blonde - you described that very effectively. Nice angle on Edward not wanting Jake to fight. I'm really curious now about Garrett's plans - how can he fit in a detour when there's barely enough time to warn the people in Forks? I'm on the edge of my seat. The odds are certainly not in favor of the Forks army.
| Linguist chapter 17 . 1/21/2011
Susie here - I like the Garrett as a spy subplot! I'm so nervous about the upcoming battle, but I know it will all turn out alright because of the title, "Perfect Forever"!
I know it isn't my place to do any editing, but in Aro's letter, he refers to Carlisle as the 'matriarch' of the family. He would actually be the 'patriarch' (father)