Reviews for Perfect Forever
Guest chapter 16 . 12/29/2020
Kill off all of the evil vampires, (including the Volturi and Dallas.) Kill all of the evil vampires off right now, and let the Cullens and all of their friends and allies live in peace! NOW!
Silas chapter 24 . 11/28/2020
I just finished reading this. It’s definitely one of the best fan fics i’ve read.
Ev chapter 2 . 5/18/2020
I love the story and am just going to give you some constructive criticism, cause i do the same thing. When writing in the 3rd person you tend to switch perspectives a little. It gives the thoughts of two different characters in the same scene and it ends up not making sense. I do the same thing, love the story, keep up the great work.
Beau Yorke chapter 7 . 9/18/2017
Oh, well there goes our little Nessie! :-) :-)
Flo321 chapter 24 . 8/31/2016
This was such a good read...read the whole thing on a different website. But since I don't have an account there I had to log into my account on here to show my appreciation for your work. It was brilliantly written. Loved every single moment.
Oneway2011 chapter 24 . 3/20/2016
This was really fun! Thank you for writing. As far as stories go, I'm generally just a consumer, as I don't appear to have much in the way of creativity, but in this case, an alternative ending occurred to me as is was going through the battle casualties. Rather than waiting for the Volturi to rebuild and find another excuse to attack, patch everybody up and head to Itialy! I know it's not Carlisle's MO at all, but suffering the carnage and loss of loved ones, knowing it is not going to stop, end the problem! I'm a live, forgive, and let live guy to a fault, but I anybody picked on or not allowed to live in peace. And I hate abuse by the powerful, "I love the Incredibly Hulk concept". Thanks, David
zelda potter chapter 24 . 8/16/2012
I'm so happy! Keep writing!
zelda potter chapter 22 . 8/16/2012
It was so sad. I cried a lot. So did my boyfriend. You really are as good as Stephanie Meyer. So many emotions put into your writing. I love it.
Zelda Potter chapter 12 . 8/15/2012
You are an awesome writer! Almost as good as Stephanie Meyer!
Guest chapter 24 . 7/29/2012
nice
Guest chapter 24 . 6/6/2012
I loved everything that you wrote. It was beautifully written, I loved the end. I loved especially how Leah's life came full circle. You did a fantastic job!
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 24 . 2/16/2012
I really love your story. I like how some people die, even though that sounds wierd. In most stories there's battles like that but nobody dies and it just doesn't make sense.

Tarah xXx
Kim chapter 17 . 12/29/2011
In the letter from the Volturi, it says Carlise is the matriarch of the Cullens but seeing as that's the female head of a family I believe you mean patriarch.
Linguist chapter 24 . 1/29/2011
Lovely ending! Funny bit about Edward's mindreading "vision" of Charlie and Sue's honeymoon night! I'm looking forward to your sequel!
Linguist chapter 23 . 1/29/2011
I absolutely love the blended family! I love the graduation gifts! Happy Ending! Of course you're leaving things open for your sequel...
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