Reviews for Perfect Forever
New2Twilight2021 chapter 24 . 12/7/2021
Great Post BD Story! I've already read a few and this one is definitely a favorite! I loved how swiftly it read. And reading from the third person was interesting! Different. Usually it's various POVs.
And your Black Pather Green-Eyed Ethan OC is OMG! I am hoping there will be a sequel! There are still loose ends. Allie, how is she going to join the Cullens and make them even more powerful. The Voltury, they won't stop so they have to be dealt with and hopefully preemptively. I am literally thinking that Carlisle, Bella, and Ethan would initiate an offensive of some kind... very covert, very elaborate offensive to end the Volturi (big boom in the underground cellar Cersei Lannister style lol).
I was also thinking that before the battle Carlisle would call Aro, saying that he has a complete file of the entire Vampire world that he will make sure goes public in the event of their demise. If his family and allies are not going to survive they are going to out the whole thing all over the internet and media and Alice already has seen how badly it's going to end for Volturi. Ugh! They just got to go...
Guest chapter 16 . 12/29/2020
Kill off all of the evil vampires, (including the Volturi and Dallas.) Kill all of the evil vampires off right now, and let the Cullens and all of their friends and allies live in peace! NOW!
Silas chapter 24 . 11/28/2020
I just finished reading this. It’s definitely one of the best fan fics i’ve read.
Ev chapter 2 . 5/18/2020
I love the story and am just going to give you some constructive criticism, cause i do the same thing. When writing in the 3rd person you tend to switch perspectives a little. It gives the thoughts of two different characters in the same scene and it ends up not making sense. I do the same thing, love the story, keep up the great work.
Beau Yorke chapter 7 . 9/18/2017
Oh, well there goes our little Nessie! :-) :-)
Flo321 chapter 24 . 8/31/2016
This was such a good the whole thing on a different website. But since I don't have an account there I had to log into my account on here to show my appreciation for your work. It was brilliantly written. Loved every single moment.
Oneway2011 chapter 24 . 3/20/2016
This was really fun! Thank you for writing. As far as stories go, I'm generally just a consumer, as I don't appear to have much in the way of creativity, but in this case, an alternative ending occurred to me as is was going through the battle casualties. Rather than waiting for the Volturi to rebuild and find another excuse to attack, patch everybody up and head to Itialy! I know it's not Carlisle's MO at all, but suffering the carnage and loss of loved ones, knowing it is not going to stop, end the problem! I'm a live, forgive, and let live guy to a fault, but I anybody picked on or not allowed to live in peace. And I hate abuse by the powerful, "I love the Incredibly Hulk concept". Thanks, David
zelda potter chapter 24 . 8/16/2012
I'm so happy! Keep writing!
zelda potter chapter 22 . 8/16/2012
It was so sad. I cried a lot. So did my boyfriend. You really are as good as Stephanie Meyer. So many emotions put into your writing. I love it.
Zelda Potter chapter 12 . 8/15/2012
You are an awesome writer! Almost as good as Stephanie Meyer!
Guest chapter 24 . 7/29/2012
Guest chapter 24 . 6/6/2012
I loved everything that you wrote. It was beautifully written, I loved the end. I loved especially how Leah's life came full circle. You did a fantastic job!
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 24 . 2/16/2012
I really love your story. I like how some people die, even though that sounds wierd. In most stories there's battles like that but nobody dies and it just doesn't make sense.

Tarah xXx
Kim chapter 17 . 12/29/2011
In the letter from the Volturi, it says Carlise is the matriarch of the Cullens but seeing as that's the female head of a family I believe you mean patriarch.
Linguist chapter 24 . 1/29/2011
Lovely ending! Funny bit about Edward's mindreading "vision" of Charlie and Sue's honeymoon night! I'm looking forward to your sequel!
149 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »