|Reviews for Perfect Forever|
| Flo321 chapter 24 . 8/31/2016
This was such a good read...read the whole thing on a different website. But since I don't have an account there I had to log into my account on here to show my appreciation for your work. It was brilliantly written. Loved every single moment.
| Oneway2011 chapter 24 . 3/20/2016
This was really fun! Thank you for writing. As far as stories go, I'm generally just a consumer, as I don't appear to have much in the way of creativity, but in this case, an alternative ending occurred to me as is was going through the battle casualties. Rather than waiting for the Volturi to rebuild and find another excuse to attack, patch everybody up and head to Itialy! I know it's not Carlisle's MO at all, but suffering the carnage and loss of loved ones, knowing it is not going to stop, end the problem! I'm a live, forgive, and let live guy to a fault, but I anybody picked on or not allowed to live in peace. And I hate abuse by the powerful, "I love the Incredibly Hulk concept". Thanks, David
| zelda potter chapter 24 . 8/16/2012
I'm so happy! Keep writing!
| zelda potter chapter 22 . 8/16/2012
It was so sad. I cried a lot. So did my boyfriend. You really are as good as Stephanie Meyer. So many emotions put into your writing. I love it.
| Zelda Potter chapter 12 . 8/15/2012
You are an awesome writer! Almost as good as Stephanie Meyer!
| Guest chapter 24 . 7/29/2012
| Guest chapter 24 . 6/6/2012
I loved everything that you wrote. It was beautifully written, I loved the end. I loved especially how Leah's life came full circle. You did a fantastic job!
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 24 . 2/16/2012
I really love your story. I like how some people die, even though that sounds wierd. In most stories there's battles like that but nobody dies and it just doesn't make sense.
| Kim chapter 17 . 12/29/2011
In the letter from the Volturi, it says Carlise is the matriarch of the Cullens but seeing as that's the female head of a family I believe you mean patriarch.
| Linguist chapter 24 . 1/29/2011
Lovely ending! Funny bit about Edward's mindreading "vision" of Charlie and Sue's honeymoon night! I'm looking forward to your sequel!
| Linguist chapter 23 . 1/29/2011
I absolutely love the blended family! I love the graduation gifts! Happy Ending! Of course you're leaving things open for your sequel...
| Linguist chapter 22 . 1/29/2011
Susie here -
Wow. I'm so glad it wasn't Ethan who killed Garrett. Interesting development with Allie - I wasn't expecting that! Very nice touch having Bella and Edward go back to her "childhood" room for a little lovemaking! Awww!
| Linguist chapter 21 . 1/29/2011
Grisly image at the end. I'm so sad that Paul died, but happy that all the Cullens survived. I'm really wondering now if Ethan killed Garrett and put his head on the stake. If so, then there will be some infighting next. I'm also wondering if Leah will make it. The last two chapters were intense. I could never write anything like that. Kudos to you!
| Linguist chapter 20 . 1/28/2011
WOW! It was great to having the tender moments at the beginning - really lovely. I'm so upset about the deaths. I guess that is realistic, though. Maybe Rosalie isn't really dead?
| Linguist chapter 19 . 1/28/2011
I loved how you portrayed Edward after learning the sad news about Cantwell. It was so sad! The relay race and the football game (why should I have been surprised that you would put that in!) were welcome tension breakers. The football game - of course I don't get all the football stuff, but I loved how you made Bella good at it! Football with mind reading Edward was very amusing.