Reviews for Illogical
YoshisSupport chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
I rather enjoyed how this flowed and it was fun so thanks :D
darkdragonalucard chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
cute. very,very cute.
captianOfships chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
ek. my insides are all warm and fuzzy. love, love ,love. perfect.
Free of Mundane Thoughts chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Cute. Kaido kind of is, always though. And those two... are just kind of meant for each other. Anyone else with Kaido would just be...



Nice writing, and cute story, and overall love!
Purple.Chocolate.Stars chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Aww 3 This story is so sweet. Inui is such a big sap trying to deny Kaidoh. And he really does it with big words too xD Also well written. I love it xD 3
terrorofthehighway chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
Nice. I like the story progression.
yukisana chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
That was... AWESOME!

I wouldn't call myself an Emerald fan... but that was a cool story! Inui's excuses are so funny...

good job!
cominghome28 chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
Oh my goodness. Oh my goodness. I love you so much for this!

"only caused by friction between waves of hormonal outbursts" I love all the excuses Inui makes, but especially this one. It's just so *him*.

"it was not because the younger teen need help on his homework" I caught this phrase near the end, I think you meant to write "needed".

"Seeing that coy yet grumpy smile each morning… sharing his bento each afternoon, laughing at the blush on Kaidoh’s face at the sight of the heart shaped rice balls… Feeling a warm hand in his as they walked home… having that body moving beneath him as they expressed something words couldn’t, twisted up and tangled between each other, slipping over the edge…

There was no spark. No, it was more like a lightning bolt that struck Inui whenever Kaidoh was near.

If love was illogical, then he’d play the fool any day."

This. Is. So. Cute. Best ending ever! _ The whole thing is so magical and has such a cute, happy tone to it. You keep them perfectly in character and still manage to make it adorable. I am going to go read it over and over again and be happy. Thank you so much 3