Reviews for Unsaid
dazynl8 chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
O_O - I didn't want to read the last paragraph because i knew it would be the heart-breaker (which it was) so I sat there for a few minutes making up my own, happier conclusion - which was pursued, captured and slaughtered by the end of the story...C...still, you are an incredible writer! just an FYI for you )
Verasque chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
I knew you warned that it would be angsty, but it still didn't prepare me for the smooth impact at the end. It was subtle and fierce, but not abrupt, yet your amazing skills as a writer was a testament to that.

My heart aches for Kakashi, and more so Sakura, who has realised too late. You did such a great job bringing everything back to the significance of the memorial for these two.
moodiful819 chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
It could use some work. I don't mean this in a bad way. I just think it could use more development before leading up to the last line (which was perfect by the way). It just...I don't know... a little vague.
JingYee chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
;( Sad and really short, but good job anyway.
ChasingProse chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
Heartbreaking. I though the author's note at the beginning detracted slightly, though.
BlackButterfly0011 chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Its sad but sweet :)

I love it