Reviews for An Air About Him
ME LOVEY JAZZY chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Aw! How sweet! I love it!
Zors chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
This was incredibly adorable, and very well written. You don't know how happy I was that you used "smelled" instead of incorrectly assuming the word was "smelt". I actually think it would make for a very cute entertaining short story, if you want to continue it after the contest, that is.
Krum Cake chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Gahh, so cute! I love the way boys smell sometimes, so I can totally relate with Alice in this story. You did such a wonderful job describing the scents, too. I mean, I can actually picture myself nuzzling up to Jasper's neck and smelling this, or wrapping myself in his jacket like Alice does and just inhaling his scent. You said this was your first fanfiction, and it was a great start to what will hopefully become a new hobby of yours! XD

Great contest entry. :D
twilightnaley19 chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
aw. i loved this oneshot. awesome job on your first fic. i hope that you write more stories.
JasperAndJill chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
Awesome! You write so vividly, I found myself imagining Jasper's smell (by the way, Jasper is my favorite character from Twilight, so I love just about anything involving him). Hahah but this was truly great. You're so talented, I wish you had more stories up! You could be famous, you know (;
Kiki-Leonie chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
i think this is really really cute, and for your first story you did an amazing job. i thought alice was so cute, and even though it was so short (too short ;) i would've loved to read more) their actions/thoughts just seem to fit perfectly. i wonder if anything could have happened? did you actually really do that? sorry i am being curious... well i think you should consider to maybe wrtie a little sequel to this oneshot, cause i think this could be such a good beginning... but i love it as it is anyway
freakyhazeleyes chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
For a first one shot, this was very good. I love Jasper/Alice because they're not a pairing that's often written about, so the fact that you chose them to write about is what first drew me to this. And I love how cute Alice is in this. She's adorable with her infatuation with Jasper. I think the way you wrote her personality lent itself more to her pixie image than the thousands of characterizations of Alice as a cracked out shopaholic.

Very well done and I think you should write more after this.
chibi lucy chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
I like it, you did great but honestly i would be a little disapointed if you didn't continue this story. As we say in France "je suis restée sur ma faim" o
helliex88 chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Aw that was really sweet.

And I love that you used to do that lol. Do you think he ever realized?

Great entry thanks for writing it. I'm glad someone did an A/J one, I hope we get more.

Good luck!

Helena