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| Guest chapter 2 . 3/22/2012
You just got to continue the story. I loved every second of it. Eeeeeek
| Kate chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
That was really good! I'm glad Edward stopped the wedding!
| Gabz chapter 2 . 9/7/2009
this is great
would love for it to be a story!
| Annabella Hunt chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
I am an amazing beta! This story is amazing, but I think you should get a better program to use to upload stories...
| klcivinski chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
i like...i like it. turn it into a story.
| freakyhazeleyes chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
I definitely liked the concept of this story; Bella having feelings for Edward since they were kids is one fanfiction fetish of mine :) But I do think you should consider getting a beta to correct the spelling, capitalization and the few grammar issues I saw. I also feel with a good beta your idea could be fleshed out a bit more.
I do love Edward in scrubs though and the fact that he broke up a wedding for Bella was a nice touch.
| helliex88 chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Thanks for your entry!
I was wondering though, have you ever considered getting a beta? Becasue you make some spelling mistakes that I think distract the reader fro your writing. Which is a real shame because I really liked the one shot, I just kept on getting distracted by the spelling mistakes.
I'm going to ask cdunbar if you could edit this entry to correct the mistakes, because I think you'd probably stand a much better chance that way.
If you're willing that is.
Anyway, good luck and thanks for entering!