Reviews for Unspoken |
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![]() ![]() ![]() awsome chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awsome chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, nice ending! The last paragraph tied everything together and made me feel like this chapter was worth reading! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww... Cute... ) Vut Inu screwed up... As usual... XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this! Inuyasha's logic is quite adorable! The hanyou makes a good point however, they both have gotten so used to each other, but not in the -I'm bored of you- kind of way, but in the -I'm so comfortable around you I forget how complicated and crazy our lives are- way. Once again, I love how you find the small things and point them out. Those little things that mean a whole lot, but we overlook. I enjoyed Miroku in this as well. D He always stands to make me remember that for the most part Kagome and Inuyasha are in the feudal era and things are *different*. I guess it's because Inuyasha can travel through the Well that I forget. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now that was just plain freakin' sweet. In fact, I'm over here dying from the fluffiness. Darn you, you stuffer of fluff! :) I really enjoyed it, nonetheless. This is a death I welcome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw Inuyasha's sweet. Misunderstood - He's just shy and not good with words. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, this made me smile! :) I love the last sentence especially! And the way you described Kagome's blending in/standing out. And..well, just all of it! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice.. all of them.. just like usual. :) thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahh |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that explanation of the idea "nothing special" |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol"" Splish Splash i was taking a bath..."" |
![]() ![]() ![]() ::smirk:: |
![]() ![]() ![]() ::big smile:: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter, though I think you need to proof it over once more. Kagome's name was left out in the sentence that she mutters, "I'm nothing special." And I think there should also be a question mark after, "...why couldn't Miroku?" Nonetheless, truly enjoyed the portrayal of the overall theme. You've got a knack for Inuyasha's character and it's good to see that he really does care for Kagome's "training." ;) |