Reviews for Unspoken
rowdysgirl chapter 9 . 1/27/2010
Forthy, why is it that one chapter from you is more satisfying than 2 chapters from anyone else? You always manage to touch my heart and make me see an aspect of these characters that I haven't seen before.

I did see one thing in this chapter:

Inuyasha stared at the raindrops drumming against [against] the window.

And I re-read the other chapters again and found this in Chapter 7:

He carefully [leaning] leaned his sword against the wall beside the door,

And that will make this perfect!

Dragon Ashes chapter 9 . 1/27/2010
This is one of those stories so absolutely cute, they're beyond words. Therefore, I resort to emoticons:

:-) ;-D

...and the like.

Thanks, and keep up the good work! May you always enjoy writing even more than we reviewers enjoy reading!
Crystal Twilight chapter 9 . 1/27/2010
Aww. Cute.
foreshadowing chapter 9 . 1/26/2010
ah inu, he's so darn loveable. this just brightened up my day. great work!
madmiko chapter 9 . 1/26/2010
Beautiful! I am just amazed at how much you can do with so few words. The art of the drabble escapes me completely. _ Such a small scene, such a lot of feeling. Bravo!
mannd1068 chapter 8 . 1/11/2010
Excellent chapter
LadyBetriz chapter 8 . 12/28/2009
I enjoyed these drabbles immensely. They were very fun to read.
Ayjah chapter 8 . 12/6/2009
so... lovely!
WritingRin chapter 4 . 11/29/2009
Soo cute. I just CAN'T get over it T_T
DreamBeamz chapter 8 . 11/29/2009
Yay for uncut versions and learning what happens in those quiet moments. :)
DreamBeamz chapter 7 . 11/29/2009
I love this interpretation :) I love his thoughts toward Kagome and safety :)
kokoronagomu chapter 8 . 11/27/2009
for someone for his whole life had all kinds of reasons to distrust everyone, the trust he put in kagome's hands is just amazing. i think that with kikyou, he was more than likely waiting for the other shoe to fall.
Zak saturday 1 chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
iNuQTpIe chapter 8 . 11/25/2009
Aw ]] This was so... Sweet. In a sorrowful way...
xxangel221xx chapter 8 . 11/25/2009
thanks for updating :)

this was pretty insightful. I duuno why, but I think it's some of the fanfics here that make you love a series more- you always find something new.
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