Reviews for Another Chance
purplejemrain chapter 16 . 12/31/2017
this is really good i'm glad i stumbled on this gem! i nearly cried on some parts but i love it all the same.

if i were to rate it i would give it a 10/10
GinHanelle chapter 16 . 12/12/2017
I can hardly believe I have not read one of your Naruto fanfics till now. Tiro, darling, thank you. I highly enjoyed this cute friendship story. Even the harrowing parts. Also, two Itachis (sort of). Yay! Heheheheh, that was fun. Would have loved to see more of Itachi but I could understand the focus on Gaara, Shika, and Naruto.
Best wishes with your current project!
Kibo Oto chapter 16 . 10/30/2017
I just... I'm not one to get emotional, but this story hit a cord in my soul. It is now forever embedded in my memory. Thank you for this.
tenshiakuma14 chapter 16 . 9/25/2017
Really loved it. Enjoyed it very much and the fact that you complete it was a HUGE bonus!
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Zela Night chapter 7 . 8/19/2017
A really good read.
Flamarow chapter 16 . 8/12/2017
The ending to the fight with Madara was really weird to me but I think I understand how Naruto managed to drain his chakra. I just found the method for actually winning was done that way. Of course, it is a bit typical to leave the person on deaths door just before the resolution isn't it? :P

You kind of left out the reason Gaara is the only one that supposedly earned Naruto's kindness as I can't think of anything canon Gaara did for Naruto... Oh well, AU Gaara was probably awesome and I accept that.

I really enjoyed the reunion with young Naruto though I'm extremely disappointed that the trio didn't get labeled the "Heroes of Konoha" and get widely accepted... Oh well, at least the young Naruto gets a happy ending and all the Konoha rookies lived.
Flamarow chapter 15 . 8/12/2017
So... now all of it transfers into the smaller Naruto? o_O

I'd be amused if it was a clone dying but I highly doubt that, even if I could see Naruto confusing if he or the clone is the real one (seriously, how does his own clones rebel?).
Flamarow chapter 14 . 8/11/2017
I didn't notice much of importance happen... Did I miss something? The tiny bit with Itachi was practically not there. Literally a flash. The rest was just complaining about being tired...
Flamarow chapter 13 . 8/10/2017
Well... that was just odd. I've no clue where you are going with that bit about young Naruto...
Flamarow chapter 12 . 8/10/2017
I'm a bit surprised that there were only 24 left when they got to the end. Also, only 300 across 3 days? Seems a bit small for how much of a pain it was for them...

Hinata thinks she is not in love with Naruto anymore? I wonder if she is lying to herself or if it is just a product of this fanfic? Hmm...
Flamarow chapter 11 . 8/10/2017
Hinata has memorized Naruto's scent... I knew she was a stalker but I didn't realize she had been going that far. She certainly doesn't have an enhanced nose so either she has been stealing his clothes (I wonder what she does with them :3 ) or just being discrete when he is nearby. I look forward to seeing how she reacts to her realization. I'm a bit sad about 32 year old Naruto being seemingly single...
Flamarow chapter 10 . 8/10/2017
Hinata is so much less shy in this version so far... I like it though I'm really curious what is going on with that. I guess Naruto isn't overpowering her by suddenly getting in her face and making her imagination go nuts? :3

(Now I feel like looking up NaruHina pairings... Again.)

I wonder if young Shika has gotten any clues about what is going on or if he will get any kind of changes like Gaara did. I would love to see a stronger young Shikamaru though I honestly don't expect it to happen.
Flamarow chapter 9 . 8/10/2017
Well... anyone who has watched or read the series should know exactly what mission you are talking about for the next chapter. :3

I wonder what will happen with Jiraya considering he isn't being pushed toward training with him. Also, Kakashi cares. Aww, so cute. :D
Flamarow chapter 8 . 8/10/2017
He chose time traveler but was completely blown out of the water by their identities. xD

Hopefully them scaring Oro-chan so much doesn't cause him to go nuts on his changes to the third exam plans... Dropping all his experiments on Konoha at once is a scary prospect...
Flamarow chapter 7 . 8/10/2017
I'm a bit confused by the fact that there is a gap between the first and second exam... I wonder what inspired that or if I always missed that note...

Naruto is revealing himself pretty easily... I understood Gaara knowing Naruto is Shiroi (kind of) but even Baki gets to know before their own hokage? o_O
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