|Reviews for I Crave Your Mouth, Your Voice, Your Hair|
| nellysh chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
where have remained all the good stories - such yours!
| Yamal chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
Sweet! Nice work! Thanks a lot. _
| Tyler444 chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
an awesome story, very well developed characters.
i, however, cannot imagine ron and hermione eloping.
hermione cares too much about her parents, and the weasleys.
moreover, the sort to really enjoy detailed weddings. she would want to be thorough, judging how she gets only one shot at marriage.
otherwise, GREAT fic! i loved how they make up so easily, for once
| shanncute chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
i love this story. i want to know waht happens if they do elope. love it!
| ruatcaelum chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
| NellieNotMolly chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
Oh my gracious! :-)
Well, all the hot stuff is really sweet when there is feeling behind it, which there certainly is with our favorite couple! I keep picturing the two of them in a linen closet during the wedding reception! Ha!
I'm glad Hermione will be getting her white roses and lilacs!
| bookworm-with-bite chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
That was amazing! Its hard to tell a story through lemons but you did a fabulous job. Best Ron?Hermione story I've read in a long time. Great Work!
| melakem chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
"I Crave Your Mouth..." is one sexy poem! Boy, did you choose well! It's so funny to think that this is your first piece of smut, because I think several things you've written are incredibly arousing. You do an awful lot with just suggestion in most of your writing, and the depth of relationships that you portray. That impresses me greatly.
This story certainly does of fine job of using that same talent. The relationship between Ron and Hermione is very well developed. Their argument had all the fire and passion I expect from them, and a level of hurt that can only be dished out by someone whom you love so deeply. I was so happy to see them make-up. (And the smut was pretty hot stuff!) Eloping was a perfect ending to a lovely night!
| MaNdErS20100 chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
Wonderful one-shot! _
| Argentinita chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
Tengo hambre de tu boca, de tu voz, de tu pelo
y por las calles voy sin nutrirme, callado,
no me sostiene el pan, el alba me desquicia,
busco el sonido líquido de tus pies en el día.
Estoy hambriento de tu risa resbalada,
de tus manos color de furioso granero,
tengo hambre de la pálida piedra de tus uñas,
quiero comer tu piel como una intacta almendra.
Quiero comer el rayo quemado en tu hermosura,
la nariz soberana del arrogante rostro,
quiero comer la sombra fugaz de tus pestañas
y hambriento vengo y voy olfateando el crepúsculo
buscándote, buscando tu corazón caliente
como un puma en la soledad de Quitatrúe.
that's the whole poem in spanish )
No matter how much I love learning english, and it's simple grammar structures, I cant deny my roots and is like spanish words are warmer :P
anyway I LOVED this fic D
and I enjoyed so much the reading RON
poor guy, he should've taken it easy... for someone who's not use to that kind of literature, to begin with Neruda...
just kidding :)
I enjoyed it... really really enjoyed it.
sorry for my lack of words
| AngelicKat445 chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
Amazingly well written! I loved it! Is there another chapter? There should be, about their eloping. They are eloping, right? I thought so :) Keep up the work and, again, I LOVE IT!
| ObsessedRHShipper chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
Excellent story! Maybe another chapter or two? :)
| Robin of Nottingham chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
Very sweet, and VERY sexy! Especially for your first smutty fic, well done! I loved the ending as well. I hope we get more like this from you in the future.
| mediusminimus chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Nice job, especially for your first time writing smut! :)