|Reviews for High and Dry|
| Trista 3 chapter 4 . 3/7/2017
Wow what an a good story! The Sullagi are a species that very proud and only want genetic perfection! Need a story about the baby, hopefully the mother survives for the sake if her daughter. How did she meet her lover!?
| AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA chapter 4 . 9/22/2013
| Hope-W chapter 4 . 2/7/2010
pretty nice! hope you to continue writing it
| swishyskirt chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Well, I'm liking your broad vocabulary, especially with descriptives. Kirk's "throne" was a nice touch, and went smoothly with how you portrayed his character. Which, might I add, was believable.
In fact, all of the characters were believable. With Spock and Uhura acting the roles they played out in the movie. It makes sense that she is the one always reaching out, and that his incapability of reciprocating her love is creating rifts between the two of them.
I believe you could do a better job of transitioning. The beginning line sets the scene for chaos: no fuel, flashing red, blaring sirens...and then the crew acts as if they're back at the academy, playing out Spock's lose-lose test. Wouldn't they all be yelling over the alarm? Reminding the reader about the stressful situation everyone is in could make the beginning less glitch-y.
And also, when Spock and Uhura are together, there could be more build-up to the moment when Spock is unable to requite Nyota's love. You could really draw out the emotions leading up to that moment, and then condense the fight to leave a more lasting effect on the reader. Have Kirk and Scotty interrupt a bit sooner, so that Nyota's dialog becomes internal. This could set the premise for the rest of your story. I think you could take more time in this.
The thing is, you have a noticeable energy in this fic, almost humorous. That's great to have, but you'll need to make it clear to the reader that your mood is shifting to something serious to make it more believable. I really like what you've done with the characters, and that Scotty got some lime light. I'm lookin' forward to chapter 2.
| sadhappygirl chapter 3 . 8/4/2009
great chapter, please update soon...
| ldsrsc chapter 3 . 8/2/2009
Ugh, I would not want to be stuck in a cell just with Kirk. lol
Just a small complaint: I had a little trouble following who was saying what lines. It appeared that sometimes the next line of dialog didn't actually change characters, so I got a little confused.
However, great story! Need more chapters!
| Office-LOver chapter 3 . 8/2/2009
Awesome. Update soon.
| Babita chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
*sob* Thanks for updating.
| kendrat199 chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
I find it impossible that Kirk would ask about high heels, not know their purpose, and even not know their name. For a cassanova such as himself, it seems unlikely that he would be ignorant of shoes/attire/makeup/anything feminine and its affect on the female in question.
However, I do want Spock to rescue them, and by want, I mean need. Scotty and McCoy must come because hey, they're awesome :3. Cute Chekov needs to stay on the ship so he doesn't get hurt!
| kendrat199 chapter 2 . 8/1/2009
And people said that Vulcans were better than Romulans. Spock's going to use his capture as a shield if he must, not very worth Starfleet's Prime Directive. However, if it means saving his loved one-Uhura- and friend-Kirk- then it's not entirely illogical.
I think I have to read the previous chapter.
| Bandbabe chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
I really like this story! This chapter was great. The interaction between Uhura and Kirk was funny. Especially how she resisted him sharing a bed with her!
| QTFics chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
Another great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next.
| Nyotarules chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
OK this is for chapter one, so far loving all the characters except for Noyota, this version is coming across as a whining minnie. Does she want a relationship with a Vulcan raised Vulcan/Human male or does she want a relationship with a Vulcan raised Vulcan/Human male so she an try to turn him into the average Terran boyfriend?
| sadhappygirl chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
I am so glad you update this...
I hope Spock rescue Kirk and Uhura before its to late...
please update soon...
I want to read more
| ldsrsc chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
Interesting story. Keep it up! Waiting for more!