|Reviews for A Pet To Evil|
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/4/2012
When is he gonna be sorts nice lol
| lud chapter 12 . 7/9/2012
His story is so good, I know it's your right to stop, but would be very kind of you to continue.
His struggle against feelings of Edward, who were placed on the head, the things he learned that it was his right as a vampire, but deep down he cares for Bella.
I know that this story was taken, but it is not the same thing, she changed the essence of Bella Edwrad and in another story, and do not really like the way she wrote.
Kisses and sorry for my English because I am Brazilian.
| Destiny chapter 12 . 3/31/2012
Fuck you. really? that was a great story. obviously you have gotten to "good" for it. Fucking it up for adoption
| CTgirl14 chapter 12 . 11/29/2011
douknow if changed her username? I cant find her
| kr chapter 12 . 8/12/2011
i cant find the mrs. lutz person that has your story can u put up a link or something thanks
| TheBonesOfMe chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
gosh dark much?
| barb.ly chapter 3 . 7/23/2011
****I see you are also taking my reply like a big girl. I did say I could start up a new story all I wanted because you said it was wise not .
I can do whatever I want with anything I write on ff without you criticizing my actions. Thanks Mom.
I can't take you seriously because you probably do things like this all the time to tons of other authors who have tried something. When in reality you are just a person sitting on a computer alone and with nothing better to do.
Thanks for being my editor in chief! You're the greatest!
That is all. Thanks for your time.****
Do you think that it is mature to mimic my words in your reply? I bet you do little girl.
For your information, I have a life. One that I am extremely proud of, thank you very much. But I also like to read FF. It is pretty darn addicting.
No, I do not do this to tons of people on here. Other people on here take the criticism because they are not little girls who think this is a site where no one gives their opinions. That was all I was doing. Giving my opinion. I am sorry if you can’t handle that. Can I suggest another site where mean people like me won’t tell you the truth? Oh wait. There isn’t one.
Stop sending me messages. I am not interested in being cyber stalked.
This is the end.
Oh! Not that it really matters, but please do not call me mom. I would never claim you.
Thank you for your time.
| barb.ly chapter 2 . 7/22/2011
*****First of all I just wanted to say that thanks so much for stating the obvious. I mean you know it really feels great to hear that, to hear something that I obviously already know.
Right now I currently dont know what I'm doing with the story, so I will take it down when I want and I won't have someone over the internet telling me when to take it down.
If you had actually read my long apologetic author's note, you would see that I feel the same way you do. And to even ask questions that I already answered in the author's note.
I can start a new story all I want, and the other story I have up is in an undecieded state right now, so i please don't need you coming over and stomping on my already insecurities about it.
Maybe you should write an actual story before doing this to already tons of other fanfiction people*****
That is the message you sent me. It is nice to see that you can be a big girl when receiving criticism. It shows real potential. Get over it.
Obviously I did read your long apologetic author’s note or I would not have known that you were planning on abandoning the story. Duh.
I haven’t written a story because I don’t have the experience or knowledge to write something that is great. I think I even said that in my review. I never said you couldn’t start up a new story. I said it isn’t wise. Look the word up because you obviously have no idea what it means.
I never said that you had to take your story down. I said you should. That was me implying the obvious. Again, you lack the brains to understand.
Not that is really matters but that message you sent me has an embarrassing amount of mistakes in it for someone who is a writer (even on FF) I can’t take you seriously.
If you have anything more to say, feel free. It is a free country where I live.
That is all. Thanks for your time.
| barb.ly chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
I was actually kind up upset when I read that you don’t plan on completing this story. Then I decided to go back and read it over again.
I couldn’t even get through the first chapter. My reading has obviously improved. This story is terribly written, holds little to no emotion, way to perverted to be natural. It has ridiculous dialogue that actually makes me embarrassed that I enjoyed this at one point.
All I can think is ‘What the hell was I thinking?’
I am no writer, but I would like to think that I am a pretty good reader and judge of stories that are well written and… not so well written.
I can’t believe I loved this story at one point and waited for an update for a few months… I am honestly very disappointed in myself.
Now! You have absolutely no intention of completing this fic so you should take it down.
Also, it is not wise to start a new fic when you have an incomplete and abandoned story.
Sorry if this all sounds kind of rude. I am just being honest. Take it like a big girl (most authors on FF do not) or cry about it. I won’t listen with kind ears.
That is all.
| switzerland333 chapter 12 . 6/11/2011
Its sad that your not finishing this story, but its completly understandable if you have no desire to finish it. I can't wait for your next story. I am curious though, is it going to be a similar plot as this one? Or even simialr idea? Or completly different?
| cool chapter 12 . 6/11/2011
I think it's fine actually, cause the same thing happened to me. It was a good story while it lasted though, I hope you have fun writing your next one, and you dont lose your inspiration either :) Good luck! I dont have any suggestions though, sorry :L
-iObliviouss (couldnt be bothered to log in) ;D
| Warriorgirl11 chapter 12 . 6/11/2011
I love badward and meanward and darkward but also try writing something rated teen I try not to read mature rated stories
| LivingInTheFantasy chapter 12 . 6/11/2011
It's alright because I completely understand. I wrote a story little while ago which seems immature now so I'm writing a new one. I suggest you write a couple of chapters, like 10 - 20 or so before you publish it. Trust me, you'd want that. I currently wrote 3 chapters and I have higher hopes for this story than the other one. But hey that's just my opinion . Anyways good luck with the story.
| cbzoo chapter 12 . 6/11/2011
well why don't you pull the story or put it in the description that you don't finish what you start and save people wasting their time starting it.
You really can't claim to be an author of 1 story.
| MarianneNorthmanCullen chapter 12 . 6/11/2011
I am indeed disapointed... Very much but I won't say you suck or any other equally vulgur thing... I don't believe that we are here to judge but to support fellow writers. So just go on! Find another wonderful plot and make us love it just like this! I will be there when you start it!
I also suggest that you put this up for adoption if you want... I have seen it done many times and I believe that this is a story worth finishing!