Reviews for Ghostly
TheAwesomeCocoPuff chapter 2 . 5/5/2015
hehehe. near intended for that to happen. :33
X chapter 2 . 11/9/2014
I hate near
pandagirl77 chapter 2 . 9/17/2010
This is soo good you have to finish it!
Funky Bracelet Chick chapter 2 . 4/7/2010
i can't tell who won...but i think it was near.
Shebali chapter 2 . 12/19/2009
Every story of yours I've read so far I absolutely adore

This one is no different.


Perfect ending :)
Miyae chapter 2 . 9/8/2009

Login, too lazy

I love. Please continue. Yes.

Is not English
RainingArrows chapter 2 . 9/8/2009
Cool, not many people do fanfics on the Wammy boys' backgounds- in fact this is the first one I've read and I really liked it X3

I wish you could've been more detailed with his past but what you gave is still great and it leaves something for the imagination

But now I really want to more about the past of the other Wammy boys T.T...

Anyway good work
xgirltalk chapter 2 . 8/7/2009
Wahh! i absolutely love this. :]

I love your spin on how mello and near met.

it was all very clever. :]

the last line, "Gothcha"

hee, perfect. ] and so starts the mello/near competition. x) whee, love these two!

i would love to see you continue this! you are a fabulous writer.

and i agree with the Breena Marie; near has his own set of expressions, especially the ever-famous near smile :)

but either way, great! _
LibertyRoll chapter 2 . 7/17/2009
I can't wait to see more of your stuff - I thourally enjoy your take on Mello, Near and Matt's lives.

I really liked how you focussed on Mello here.

One thing, though... If you'll look at the manga, Near isn't expressionless... He's just extremely subdued. He smiles a lot, he gets angry, and even surprised when his captive Mogi actually says something ("Oh so you can talk, Mr. Mogi - you're very impressive!")

But I still am in love with your stories, and keep writing them! :)

*Noms cyber pocky*
TheDarkWingedAngel chapter 2 . 7/13/2009
... I love it ...

... Please update soon! ...

... Please? ...

... Thank you ...
TheDarkWingedAngel chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
... I love the idea ...
Elisabetta Avalone chapter 2 . 7/6/2009
I tried to review this story before but my computer bailed on me ... Anyway! I thought this was all written wonderfully in character and I found your interpretation of them both very interesting. Your version of Mello's past was also intriguing. :)

Melica chapter 2 . 7/4/2009
This is great! You got Near's in character so well and the Mello strut is just hilarious :3

The gotcha bit is just pure cuteness coming from Near!

Looking forward to your next update! Keep it up~