|Reviews for Ghostly|
| X chapter 2 . 11/9/2014
I hate near
| pandagirl77 chapter 2 . 9/17/2010
This is soo good you have to finish it!
| Funky Bracelet Chick chapter 2 . 4/7/2010
i can't tell who won...but i think it was near.
| Shebali chapter 2 . 12/19/2009
Every story of yours I've read so far I absolutely adore
This one is no different.
Perfect ending :)
| Miyae chapter 2 . 9/8/2009
Login, too lazy
I love. Please continue. Yes.
Is not English
| RainingArrows chapter 2 . 9/8/2009
Cool, not many people do fanfics on the Wammy boys' backgounds- in fact this is the first one I've read and I really liked it X3
I wish you could've been more detailed with his past but what you gave is still great and it leaves something for the imagination
But now I really want to more about the past of the other Wammy boys T.T...
Anyway good work
| xgirltalk chapter 2 . 8/7/2009
Wahh! i absolutely love this. :]
I love your spin on how mello and near met.
it was all very clever. :]
the last line, "Gothcha"
hee, perfect. ] and so starts the mello/near competition. x) whee, love these two!
i would love to see you continue this! you are a fabulous writer.
and i agree with the Breena Marie; near has his own set of expressions, especially the ever-famous near smile :)
but either way, great! _
| LibertyRoll chapter 2 . 7/17/2009
I can't wait to see more of your stuff - I thourally enjoy your take on Mello, Near and Matt's lives.
I really liked how you focussed on Mello here.
One thing, though... If you'll look at the manga, Near isn't expressionless... He's just extremely subdued. He smiles a lot, he gets angry, and even surprised when his captive Mogi actually says something ("Oh so you can talk, Mr. Mogi - you're very impressive!")
But I still am in love with your stories, and keep writing them! :)
*Noms cyber pocky*
| TheDarkWingedAngel chapter 2 . 7/13/2009
... I love it ...
... Please update soon! ...
... Please? ...
... Thank you ...
| TheDarkWingedAngel chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
... I love the idea ...
| Bemused Writer chapter 2 . 7/6/2009
I tried to review this story before but my computer bailed on me ... Anyway! I thought this was all written wonderfully in character and I found your interpretation of them both very interesting. Your version of Mello's past was also intriguing. :)
| Melica chapter 2 . 7/4/2009
This is great! You got Near's in character so well and the Mello strut is just hilarious :3
The gotcha bit is just pure cuteness coming from Near!
Looking forward to your next update! Keep it up