|Reviews for Until the End|
| PoisonCookies chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
Aww now you've made me cry!
| Syriiak chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
*sniffles* That was beautiful! And scary and completely possible...
Poor Miranda! I just wish I could help her!
*bursts into tears*
Keep up the good work!
| aurla0 chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
I think I'm... I have to cry...
It's not fair. SHe shouldn't have to go through that, see her husband age in front of her while she stays the same...
It shouldn't have to happen to her...
| Royal blueKitsune chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
*claps* This is...touching and scary and quite possible. Poor Miranda - I can't even imagine immortality, let alone want it unless I have lots of people who will share it with me.
Let me just correct two small unwilling mistakes though:
It's 'tata' not 'tată' here - "I should make one for tată!" Tată translates more along the lines of 'father!' with the exclamation mark firmly there!
Tată should be used here - "Tatâ!" Nadja exclaimed indignantly. (which is exactly what I pointed out earlier! There can be no â at the end of this particular word...ever!)
Otherwise! *thumbs up* A-OK!
| Keita Lee chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Oh.. oh dang.
It takes a lot to make me tear up, especially when I'm just reading, but this... wow. I don't know what to tell you, other than it was -amazing,- and I feel touched. xDD It was so.. sad, and emotional, and it was -great.-
You just earned yourself a spot on my favorite stories list. xDD It takes a lot for me to consider something for my favorites, but this story was so amazing. I don't usually like sad stories, and I'm not a huge KroryMiranda fan, but holy freakin' dang this was good. xDD I think I'm gonna go download that song so I can get inspired too.
This was -great.- Keep up the good work. C:
| Misty Narumi chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
so sweet and sad...
great job! :)
| waterlit chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
eh this was nice and deeply moving, heh.
the descriptions were touching :D
| MoonlitMelody chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
*sniffle* poor Miranda. T_T
It was touching. Personally, I would've liked more detail on their experiences together while Krory was middle-aged; did Miranda ever pass herself off as Krory's daughter? That's my advice.
Lovely premise. I hope that doesn't end up happening in the manga. Too sad. '(
| Joyce chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
Reminded kinda of Chrno Crusade :') A really good oneshot