Reviews for You Hide And I Seek
phastbooboo chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
I thought you did a good job on this fic. Though, I think it could be a tad longer and a little more detail. I also felt the kissing scene lacked some emotion. But other than that I thought I was pretty good.
R chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Really good, but needs more detail at the end xx