|Reviews for Across Worlds|
| fantasyfan12341234 chapter 9 . 7/12
This story was amazing. I enjoyed every second of it and I'm glad that it was a happy ending. Thank you so much for writing this. It's amazing, just amazing. And your style of writing and the way you kept the story original made it authentic and engaging! An awesome job! ;)
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/18
I loved it! Thank you so much for writing this!
| Allytsuki chapter 19 . 12/29/2014
your story ws really sweet and well written.
It really touched me!
| Stelmariana chapter 1 . 10/9/2014
I usually like crossovers like these, but even the first chapter of this story has dozens of clichés, and the speech patterns are all wrong.
| Miketsukami-kun chapter 19 . 9/17/2014
I know that Lewis and Tolkien wouldn't mind because you did it beautifully! I absolutely loved this! I liked how u were pretty unique in all the things you thought of, for example this is the first I have read with an army of dwarves (: absolutely loved it!
| crangelique chapter 19 . 9/11/2014
I loved everything about this story, although I did hope that you wrote the ending not on the author's notes. It would've been a nice wrap up had it been spun on the last epilogue.
Thank you for this beautiful tale.
| Justa Girl3 chapter 12 . 6/24/2014
I'm really liking your story! However, just so you know, dwarfs are NOT immortal, as you mentioned in chapter 12. They love incredibly long life's, up to about 200-250, but they are not immortal. Tolkien was very clear that Elves were the only immortal species in middle earth.
| Guest chapter 19 . 4/1/2014
This is one of the best stories I have ever read. It is a great 'what if' for Susan. I admit to weeping, guy though I am. To the Author of all Real Stories, May we who wait always hod to trust in Him.
| Guest chapter 19 . 3/31/2014
That was an astounding,joyful,suspenseful, and thrilling story about the undying love between Susan and !
| Guest chapter 19 . 3/18/2014
I am crying right now. After all that time, Susan wouldn't give her heart to someone else and Legolas waited and endured the pain. And after all they sacrificed, they found each other again. Pkathrine, in this story you clashed 3 different worlds together and created something unforgettable. I am freakin serious. And you also showed love is forever, and it is. Girls, I hope you all find your Legolas and keep that freakin hope alive for true love. Never mind the pain of loss because your Legolas will freakin wait an eternity. Though I have not found my Legolas, I can not wait until I am with him in Valinor. (I am a Christian, so heaven for me is Valinor). Please don't do anything bad to me! Bye!
| whrr.trudy chapter 19 . 3/9/2014
Thank you for sharing your story, I very much enjoyed it. :)
| randomkitty101 chapter 19 . 2/6/2014
Oh. My. Gosh. It has been exactly four days since I found this story, and each night I would read around four chapters each night, and it was a battle to shut the laptop every time. This story is really amazing, and it has taken a special place in my reading-heart. The relationship itself was an amazing story, but having it be a crossover between Tolkien's Lord of the Rings and C. S. Lewis's Chronicles of Narnia was AMAZING. I'm so glad I had the privilege to read this stunning story and believe me when I say I enjoyed every second of it. Once again, thank you for writing this story. You are amazing :) never stop writing!
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/1/2014
HE LIKES HER! GET THEM MARRIED!
| Regin chapter 18 . 1/1/2014
I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!
| Irene90 chapter 19 . 8/11/2013
I read your story for second time, I do not remeber if I have left you a riiew before, but in any case I feel the need to tell you something. Actually, I have no words to say. The story is a masterpice! The Gentle Queen is my favorite and I love her so much! I like how you mix Narnia and Lord of the Rings together. The epilogue part is so heartbreaking! You have done an amazing job!