Nice work

Fab honeymoon story ;)

This is really lovely. I like how you have Maria praying to calm herself (of course that's what she'd do), and Georg's unthinking words (not meant to be threatening or impatient, but easily perceived by her in that light) and then his subsequent quieting. Some very nice touches in this little story. Thank you!

Maria and George wedding night

Wow. Just wow.
This was exquisite

sooooooooooo beautiful... just the way their first night should be... just love this fic... thank you ;)

This was wonderful. Very good job! I loved it. (:

aw this is soo good...i tried to look for a Sound of Music story after watching the movie right now...i love it!

I thought I'd review here again since this second chapter (it's the same as the end of the first is it not?) allows me to. While I don't like the fact that the second chapter is just a repeat I can see that you edited this. Took me a minute to figure it out which must mean that you did quite a bit of editing. I read my last review and you seem to have fixed everything that I had a problem with. Nice work. Correct me if I'm wrong but I also feel like you've made it sound more complete at the end...or perhaps that's just the "Complete" sign at the top of the page that's telling me that now haha. I do wish you would continue into the morning after their wedding night but I think this piece can definitely stand alone. :)

Excellent chapter! More please! :)

I would love to read more of this!

nice story

I love it! cant wait for the next chapter!

Fabulous! Can't wait for more.

this is great! you have captured the feelings of Maria well. Cant wait for more