Reviews for Lithium
Djejdjdjendkd chapter 1 . 6/12
Just...H-O-T! OMV(that stands for Oh My Vampire!)
xsamanthacullenx chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
this a really good story, very imaginitive. i would imagine some people would be grossed out by this and let there feelings be heard but dont listen to them, they are very closed minded. they have to remember that edward is a VAMPIRE! he craves blood just as much as her body and this would probably, to a vampire, be a real fetish (if they existed that is) :P keep writing more stories, cant wait to read them
S.ocd.H chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
That was amazing. Honestly, it was hot with very skillful writing. Wonderful :D
be minee x chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
This is a good one-shot. It's dark and sensual. 3
FLOOVER chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
wtf! I couldn't pass making a flame cuz you ruined a perfectly bada$$ NIRVANA song (about mental ilness and insanity) to atrashy . A completely mindless vampiric .on. No wonder twilight as hell cuz people like you write as as its author.

Next time use an emo/orgasmic song for reference, dumba$$.
TorpleKnope chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
im sorry but...this is purely disgusting. its not even tasteful. id consider mabye toning it down a few knotches, this is nothing but pure, plotless, porn. this doesnt reflect well upon you, and just imagine the people who read this! theyre probably not the kind of people you desire feedback from.
behindblueeyes1117 chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
That was...unusual..but I find it really...arousing I must say...really good written a good lemon :-)
jenneruz chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
oh man i loved this. i was so turned on off of this
Im Poiosned chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
Aww poor Edward lol cool one shot :)
LC Rose chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
This was an amazing piece and I couldn't tell the difference between the writing styles...if Mrs. Meyer had gone there. An boy did I wonder about the very fact you've brought to life... But, moving beyond that, this was a truly wonderful piece worded perfectly and uniquely. I absolutely loved it and will read it again.
Oriana de la Rose chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
HOLY SHIT, this was amazing. WOW. That was phenomenal. I utterly forgot that it was a fantasy at all so I was jerked back into reality at the end. this was AMAZING. You definitely need more reviews for this phenomenal fanfic.

-Ori
CHSPatriot09 chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
That was demented, but weirdly satisfying. I wouldn't call myself disgusted...it was just...different. But how wouldn't Bella wake up before she bled so much? I always wake up right away...

I think it's hot that Edward still masturbated even when everyone knew he was doing it. Call me crazy, but there's something extremely sexy to me about a guy who doesn't care what anyone else thinks of him.

It's just gross that he hasn't emptied that trash bin full of jizz... :)
onmymind chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
wow. i've never read something like this before and it's fucking hot.

good job!
Powered by 23 Kicks chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
Evocatively and tastefully written. This wasn't just smut for smut's sake-this was a glimpse into Edward and his sexual frustration. And we all KNOW he was sexually frustrated. :-)

Lambiekins might be your Bella, but I'm certain you're her Edward. I think you've got him nailed.
obsessedmom chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
Excellent!
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