|Reviews for Tumbling in Darkness|
| CynthiaRosenDale chapter 2 . 6/13
please get a beta, or proofread your chapters, there's quite a number of spelling and Grammar mistakes
| CynthiaRosenDale chapter 1 . 6/13
It's not surpriced, it's spelled surprised
| Beth9891 chapter 8 . 4/13
Really like this so far! Hope you continue it B-)
| sevvyboy1fangirl chapter 1 . 4/9
you should make it clear that he isn't a wizard in this
| sevvyboy1fangirl chapter 1 . 4/8
the word is surprise not surprice.
| kat1316 chapter 8 . 1/27
Is this abandoned? this hasnt been updated for over 5 years.
| Yaoi-Lover-100 chapter 8 . 1/27
Omg you have to update
| Meilon chapter 8 . 1/22
When will the next chapter come out? I so want it! This story is beautiful! I love the way Harry and Carlisle didn't fall in love in one second, but rather they're struggling to understand each other's feelings! I also love how confused Harry is, hoe he as to fight with his thirst and nature... Carlisle, I feel sorry for him, as he believes Harry is over the moon for Edward while it's really not!
I realise it's been years since you last updated, but I can hope right?
| 23DrarryIsLove22 chapter 8 . 12/23/2015
Has this story been abandoned? It's different from other TwixHP crossover fics. Also the pairing CarlislexHarry is rare. I do hope you come back to writing this.
| PrewalShadeX chapter 8 . 7/29/2015
Awesome!Please update soon!
| ManyGamePlayer chapter 8 . 6/19/2015
This is an amazing story! Please update soon! ;)
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/14/2015
You need to make a bunch of new chapters it is a wonderful story , I love it so much , please make more chapters , you spelled a couple of things wrong , I'm not being mean about it though because I love this fanfic !
| MattKennedy chapter 8 . 1/6/2015
Interesting non-magic AU. :)
| nobaru rei chapter 8 . 6/26/2014
Oh my gosh this is like my third time reading this -.- so good
| katelaina1717 chapter 8 . 4/6/2014
Please update this fic, I truly enjoy it,