|Reviews for Mary Jane Goes To Hell|
| Murkglow chapter 19 . 7/28
I have to agree with others that have mentioned it, this really doesn't feel like a "fix-fic" (unless you want to count bringing Mayday back) since I don't really feel this "fixed" One More Day. That's not a bad thing though.
It's quite a treat to read a strong MJ and I'll never get enough of Mayday so you're story was always going to be a hit with me. On top of that Hall and Mephisto were both quite enjoyable early on. If I had to point to a weaker part of the story it would be post Sabertooth. Harry just never interested me much as a character in this and it kinda felt like treading water at spots (both of her villain recruitment attempts failing immediately with little lasting impact, ect...).
Still it was a very entertaining take on the situation presented in One More Day and anything that can take that piece of garbage and pull a good idea out of it deserves praise.
| Matthew G Given chapter 16 . 3/13
Have you ever watched Doctor Who? Because this solution is the exactly the same as the one at the end of the story The Curse of Fenric, right down to the mention of chess. I am not saying it is bad, just something interesting i noted.
| Matthew G Given chapter 2 . 3/12
Wow, this is a great job of undoing One more day which I hate because it was bad story telling and it ruined my favorite Superhero, it ruined Mary Jane who I don't care what other people say she was not boring as someone who's dad was a firefighter I used to get scared when I was a kid because i was always afraid something would happen to him, but I was too ashamed to admit it, then I discovered Spider-Man comics and the character of Marry Jane told me it was okay to be worried about your family even if they always came back fine, and there was nothing stupid and shameful about it, so to have her ripped away because the writers thought her being worried about Peter was "Too boring" was just insulting to me, and I gave up on the comic book I had been reading since I was six, then there was the fact that it deleted one of my all time favorite characters Spider-Girl, I loved reading her adventures in the future and they were just deleted like that.
So far this story is, in a very imaginative way undoing that and making Marry Jane an important character and Peter's touching point with the real world and that is how I always saw her, so good job so far and keep it up.
Thank you so much for writing this story, the parts in hell kind of remind me of Twin Peaks one of the best shows in TV history IMO, so good job there. I hope the rest of the story is as good as these first two chapters. :)
| Devil Rebel chapter 18 . 10/19/2014
It's weird to imagine this started as a "fix fic." It's much more involved, with crazy twists and turns. Darker than I usually prefer, but I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up
| Uberscribbler chapter 1 . 10/18/2014
I'm all for fixing this otherwise questionable editorial decision by the crew at Marvel. But is this really the way to do it?!
Guess I'll find out as it goes.
| Spidey-phd chapter 18 . 10/16/2014
I'm reminded of Supernatural when Castiel engraves Enocian sigils into Sam's and Dean's ribs so that they can avoid the higher and lower powers. MJ could really benefit from something like that right now.
I'm guessing MJ is going to be looking for some kind of supernatural ally? Or someone with contacts... Kingpin?
| Devil Rebel chapter 17 . 10/12/2012
so mj gets her own team? looking forward to that. keep it up
| Wolvmbm chapter 17 . 10/12/2012
Nice update In showing the inner workings of Osborn's Dark Avengers.
I can't wait to see who's on the Beta team with Mary Jane.
Nice moment between Mary Jane and Daken in this chapter.
Do keep up the good work.
| deathgeonous chapter 16 . 4/22/2012
Wow, this is seriously good. Excellent even. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
| Wolvmbm chapter 16 . 4/19/2012
If this is taken place during Dark Reign, then what will become of MJ during the Siege of Asgard where the Dark Avengers fall and Osborn is finally arrested and place in Jail ? :(
Also what will Jessica Drew, the original Spider-woman, think of the "new" Spider-woman on Norman Osborn's Dark Avengers ? :(
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one as this is one very, very risky plan from MJ to beat the devil at his own game. :(
| Wolvmbm chapter 15 . 2/7/2012
Nice update, I still stay it would be better to bring in some of Peter's "friends" in case this fight goes south off the radar, but then again who can Mary Jane contact in such a sort time ? :(
I must say Norman's a stickler for a punishment if he's going to push Spider-man to the line he would never cross. :(
I mean what would someone like Uncle Ben or Aunt May would say to Peter's current actions ? :(
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale like this one. :D
| Devil Rebel chapter 15 . 2/6/2012
keep it up
| Devil Rebel chapter 14 . 6/26/2011
keep it up
| Spidey-phd chapter 14 . 6/11/2011
I am glad you've decided to keep going with this story. Does a great job of showing the duality of the Marvel universe - human and superhuman. Good job with the portrayal of the characters. I love May-Day!
| Ratdogtwo chapter 14 . 6/9/2011
Glad to see an update ). anyway another great chapter keep up the great work