Reviews for Parents Returned |
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![]() ![]() ![]() В мире наруто техник до чёртиков иди к ингчи пусть покажет рождение наруто из мюпамяти мино или кушины. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fanfiction isn't going anywhere. Lol. Also, this story is dead or? I noticed you have added stories to your favorite list as of like 3 days ago, so you still are logging onto the website. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 20 chapters and it is still melodramatic. What .-. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uhh, Hinata is his teammate. Imprisoning her would only harm Narutos career. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This didn't age well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still too much angst. This story isn't even in that category. Can we move on to the family/adventure aspects now? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto is rather unbearable. Yeesh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why ruin the library though? That is important information most likely. Also, why aren't they mad at Gai for not looking out for Naruto as well? And wouldn't Sakura be better off with Kurenai as she could teach her Genjutsu? Wouldn't Tenzo be more capable of teaching Naruto? |
![]() ![]() ![]() A simple blood test would show that they are indeed his parents. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd say about 6-7 times when re-reading this. Although Kakashi did deserve that. As for Sarutobi at least he tried but since he didn't have a backbone in the anime he still tried. It's the Civilian Council and Danzo's fault for this mess anyway for leaking out information about Naruto. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I haven't started this fic yet, but GOD I hope Minato and Kushina run a fade against the village for everything they did to Naruto |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the kind of stupidity that Naruto fics written under 2018 produce often. Minato's soul is in the Shinigami's stomach, so he can never be summoned. Kushina was a decent fighter, but she wouldn't help much in a fight against Hiruzen. Someone of Orochimaru's caliber wouldn't bother summoning her. The premise is already impossible unless you alter the backstory right from its foundation. Or you can just pull out a bullshit from your ass and disregard common principals from the universe. When you do that, it qualifies for trash—no more than nonsensical doodles. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Some awesome story I like it it's pretty cool |
![]() ![]() damn bro's got balls for challenging the flamers |