|Reviews for Parents Returned|
| Aaron Raphael Paw chapter 1 . 1/12
Great story. I started and finished it, as it is, in less than a day. As i can see you've put a lot of thought intot he different scenarios and given the characters a twist of your own making.
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/10
shit fic don't read
| LetsSeeIfICanDoThisToo chapter 8 . 1/7
The story is alright. The concept is fine but it's seriously offputting to read one bug rage after rage story with nothing in between. I made it through chapter nine but now I just wonder why I bothered.
There is only so much rage a story can take before it simply breaks.
| Zeromaru Chaos Mode chapter 23 . 12/25/2017
honestly all of shippuuden was shit. only good thing was hinata's tits.
Pre-timeskip the Sharingan was an OP ability but with trainable methods of defeating it, the Tailed Beasts were walking chakra monsters capable of leveling cities, and sealing techniques were powerful but had some kind of direct interaction with what was being sealed.
Everything that existed, had a balance to it, a way it could be beaten, a way it could be cheated, a way it could be improved. but everything had a balance.
Shippuuden shat on all of that more than the revelation of Super Saiyan God.
| nekolovesyou chapter 3 . 12/21/2017
tbh jiyrara, saratobi and kashi deserves that and it piss's me off bec 1 jirara should of been there for minatos son 2 saratobi should of told the village about naruto's heritage and should of told naruto to and kakashi did show favortism to Sasuke by teaching him chidori bec he was goimg up against garra when naruto was goimg up against neji and whem they had a c rank mission that turned A all he taught them were tree and water walking like wtf the only reason they survived is luck tbh.
| DjZash chapter 30 . 12/12/2017
WTF Cali?! I hope to God I never receive tainted blood. Why the fuck should anyone else suffer because these people failed to practice safe sex when they had the chance?! Dude thank you so much for the update, love the story, and seriously, thanks for the warning! Huge scam for big pharma to prescribe anti-HIV meds. Wow.
| Clearhorse chapter 30 . 12/10/2017
| Guest chapter 30 . 12/10/2017
Really ? Seriously ? Just... what the hell is wrong with them ?
| Hunter-Hyung chapter 30 . 12/9/2017
I honestly don't know how this story has gained so much popularity. I've read through the first 10 chapters amd skimmed through the last 5, and it's just so mediocre and cringy. And now this story is just used for real world news updates.
| Scarease chapter 1 . 12/9/2017
Third would like feel guilty about what to tell Naruto parents and thrilled fourth Hokage back and he can final retire reading porn ,be adviser to fourth ,spend time with his family and smoke his pipe .
| Alvirus-s chapter 2 . 12/3/2017
you know, I like your ff, but Hiruzen is theoretical a military dictator, and no one would dare to speak to him like that, in fear of being executed
| KingSasori chapter 31 . 12/2/2017
This is definitely a love or hate fan fiction like a lot of your stories. That said I don’t think it has aged well because of how spread the updates are. The story was published 8 years agp which is nuts.
I’d say at least half the reviews are criticisms.
Also while it’s admirable that you use your story to speak up, the fake updates are just another way to gain cheap attention to your stories.
Hopefully you finish some of the stories you have but I doubt it. :(
| Roman trooper chapter 31 . 12/2/2017
Hooray for you. The net is for us all
| Dragon-Hero of Time chapter 31 . 12/1/2017
they take my net, i will take their families
| That one asshole chapter 31 . 12/1/2017
Fucking republicans. And fucking bussiness people. Milking everything for every cent is not gonna work. This applies to net neutrality as well. The information highway is not to be regulated, just look at China. How American would it be for us to allow businesses to limit what we know?