Reviews for Naruto's Rise
Jay chapter 28 . 3/14
I see, the fingers add up top thirteen, their squad number. Clever.
Jay chapter 28 . 3/14
I get it, the fingers add up to thirteen, their squad number. Clever.
Jay chapter 17 . 3/13
I cringed at Hinatas fight. It is totally unbelievable. First off adding lightning to the kaiten, a pure chakra attack, is like adding an element to the rasengan, extremely difficult and dangerous. The fourth couldn't do it and naruto only suceeded after a long while, and she gets it in less than 5 days. Even then the chakra drainage would have killed her the first time she used it as kaiten is an advanced ability only taught to adults because of how dangerous it is, out at least her chakra paths would be destroyed from combining an element into a chakra manipulation move. The way you write doesn't make sense, the power jumps are too unbelievable, and then he's immediately back to being powered down. I'm going to keep reading, but I have a feeling that there is much more bull shit like this in the future.
poketeen99 chapter 28 . 2/26
I was just wondering what was up with the number of fingers held up meant. Hinata held up 3 fingers, Shino held up 4 fingers, Naruto held up 5 fingers, and Itachi held up only one finger. I was just wondering what that repersents?
solomon.eyitene chapter 70 . 12/6/2014
wow, one of the best story ever
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 63 . 11/15/2014
Good chapter, but I do like the title a lot, with emphasis on the "Rat"
Guest chapter 70 . 11/12/2014
how about a sequel series :P the Adventures of Yahiko and Gyouten Company? :P going from Yahiko's time at the acadamy onward into his advancement to Hokage :P
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 44 . 11/14/2014
Like the switch to an all out war between two evils. Also, a decent enough reason to pass on sealing Yugito since three days of being vulnerable would be too dangerous with Oro on the hunt. Interesting that you are developing Kakazu as a character more. Finally, man oh man is Danzo a canny one
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 42 . 11/13/2014
Like this change in the Uchiha Clan Massacre, with an emphasis on an united clan action to deal with it. The argument of a secret purge to not weaken the village's image is not as strong if all the main clans are united in this. Plus good on giving mercy too
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 37 . 11/13/2014
Interesting idea here for how Fu could join the village. Original and has me wanting more!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 29 . 11/12/2014
You take all together too much joy in announcing cliff hangers. But it is a good story so all is forgiven!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 12 . 11/11/2014
Interesting thing on lying to Naruto about his heritage. Seems kind of an obvious idea really, or even just something other fics could have the seniors just thinking about. On one hand it involves lying to a nice kid, and would make Naruto mistrust them later, on the other hand it would be nice to know you were loved and not hear all of those comments the adults would be insulting you with.
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 8 . 11/11/2014
Interesting take on Kurama here, should be interesting!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 5 . 11/11/2014
Well, that part at the end was a surprise!
Nice story so far, a bunch of the better stories have had various clans trying to adopt Naruto, and that Hiashi was best friends with Minato, but you have really given this story life!
GodInHumanForm chapter 3 . 11/6/2014
Is the connection the rinnegan
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