Reviews for Falling Apart
Eagle Hawke chapter 46 . 7/22/2014
Thank you.
geekyfangirl3 chapter 46 . 7/2/2014
I like never review stories so you should feel honoured but that was amazing. You wrote the characters really well and I cried at the bits when Tony was coping with Ziva's 'death'. I also loved the ending, really nice :-D
Tivalover3 chapter 46 . 1/4/2014
I just finished reading your story, i know it's not that new but i love tiva so that doesn't matter;) I just wanted to tell you that I really really liked or no, I loved the story and the plot, it was reeeaaallyy greeat:D
xxxEvanesencexxx chapter 22 . 5/10/2013
love this
Athena13 chapter 46 . 4/23/2013
This was an excellent story! I really enjoyed it. I like your writing style. I look forward to reading more of your work.
GleekLover2012 chapter 46 . 4/1/2013
I'll start off with...the fact you are very lucky you got to meet the cast of NCIS. Now I'll get to the fic itself. I can see why this had so many reviews! It touched my heart right from the get-go, and you pulled the heart strings of my TIVA loving heart. The way this story was worded and structured and paced...it was all so perfect. I love your writing, so amazing! Mind blowing even. I have to say I took three days to read this because I just loved every detail of it.
Aliyah-Shalom-David34 chapter 46 . 3/6/2013
I loved your Story. I was able to Finish it within 3 hours. (Though I probably shouldv'e spent that time doing my Home work...) I really like it. :) PS: I envy you. You where able to go see NCIS.
JperW chapter 46 . 1/5/2013
Good story, thanks for writing and publishing!
JperW chapter 17 . 1/5/2013
I knew it! Yay!
JperW chapter 16 . 1/5/2013
Really loved this:

The heart does not have words. It does not write with letters or symbols. Anthony, we are all poets. Our hearts sing like sunrises and cry like rainfall. We hope as we await the light of tomorrow's dawn. We weep as we see the thunder storm above us. Our hearts find us longing for the first ray and the first raindrop. Some just cannot find the words, though they are always there. The beats are important, yes, but you find your words in the notes.

Beautiful!
JperW chapter 9 . 1/5/2013
I do think you should try to have shorter and lesser Author's notes...
JperW chapter 8 . 1/5/2013
The medical stuff is too hinky, but otherwise enjoying the story! :)
JperW chapter 6 . 1/5/2013
"watching your friend sacrifice her life to a terrorist"
What's that about.
Enjoying the story and mystery so far.
Ziva's not really actually dead right? ;)
Crazy Ninja chapter 46 . 12/12/2012
i dont usually read long stories but thisone was amazing
one of my favourite bits - chapter 44 ending
:D xx
BaronBargy chapter 42 . 6/18/2012
Hey, uhh. Gibbs called her "Officer David", But if she passed FLETC she should be a probie.

Aaron
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